I want to know how people feel about my character
By - Minecraft_Warrior
I don't think you have to worry about it being so much a Joker knockoff as a little bit overly edgy. I'm a sucker for well-depicted trauma though, so maybe playing with the angle of the batshit levels of trauma that would cause is a good way to go.
Question: Did he willingly submit to this training, knowing what it would entail? Did he volunteer without knowing? Or was he forced into it?
He was born into he underwent their training since he was a baby
Huh. So I think that’s an angle you could have a lot of fun playing with - an existence defined by literal torture coming into contact with a world that doesn’t operate that way for the most part.
The character as you described him so far reminds me a lot of Killua from Hunter X Hunter. He was born into a family of world renowned Assassins and as such was raised from a young age to endure hellish conditions that most people simply wouldn't survive.
I would say look into his character and how they chose to portray him if you haven't already. Despite his past he still manages to be a likable character flaws and all.