i am not here for promotion, advertisement, or financial benefit. i am just asking the hip-hop community to review and leave feedback on the song i have made. i do not know if this is the right place on the sub to post my material. so please forgive me if i am wrong and remove the comment. keep in mind i have 0 knowledge in mastering so the audio quality is not the best but it is the best i could get it to after 5 hours of editing. my main focus is expression and lyricism. I used audacity to record and edit the song. The info for the beat and who did what on the song are available in the description of the song. The song itself is not mainstream or marketable by any means as i write about things like psychology and theology or other fields of study and entertainment.
i thank you all for your time and please do not sugar coat anything. i am a big boy who takes criticism well. i want that raw and direct constructive critique.
https://soundcloud.com/zerozenn/loser
How do I keep inflection and tonal shifts without screaming the entire verse? I have a yeti mic and audacity plus I am in poverty so spending 200 dollars for studio time and mastering isn't in my budget.
hmm i can do that but it will be difficult at first to transcribe the emotional tone into a louder function without changing the emotion present. thanks for the advice i will try it out and see what happens.
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i agree with the man below, i think what you can do is try punching in, also learn more mixing skills to boost your sound quality sometimes the perfromance can be there but the mixing of the track is whats going to take it to the next level.
Great melodic flows, mixing as well as over a beat that fits in the vibe and lyrics. Good stuff.
Here’s my track if you’d like to listen:
https://open.spotify.com/track/2GAI28nteM2vPSZU1Uke7i?si=021fb102a9e74298
New playlist oriented towards up and coming artist looking for new talents and listeners alike all music is welcomed
[Friend$](https://open.spotify.com/playlist/2VuwagUcRWAPFXHXUV60Cz?si=IiorXZ0oQ8CIDofeIe5hsQ)
the historical contents lead into a meaning for the word choices. the sentence structure is well formed. the emotion involved with the subject matter and the reason/justification for expression is perfect. outside of my own views this needs some more production work. i got an associate with over 15 years of master experience if you want i can ask him if he would be willing to work with you. he might be able to clean up this track if you have the recordings still or just rerecord the vocals and let my associate know what you are looking for in the contexts of editing. other than that i think you made a beautiful song that a lot of those in suffering would be relieved to experience.
Marching Band Goes Electro
Marching Band Sound + Hip Hop/Trap Beat + Colonel Bogey Whistle song + Vaughn Monroe sound Off "the Duck worth Chant" =
LeWelsch - Marching Band Goes Electro
https://youtu.be/96sxgakcin8
Company Halt! Have a Great Sunday
LeWelsch
just dropped this yesterday on my birthday show some love🖤🎵
ALONE IN AN EMPTY HOME
https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLHzNaThu3XdMDlULVj6LDULEHW6oFbNq9
Here's a beat that I made, inspired by The Talos Principle game, you guys can use it at will, just give a shoutout in description or something
https://youtu.be/GD9_TmLl_l0
new track https://soundcloud.com/jamesadelic/make-it-out?si=151b475d94914518bbdb89c49844f834&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing, working on mixing songs for a tape :)
(FREE) ASAP ROCKY x CLAMS CASINO x LIL B CLOUD RAP TYPE BEAT - LOST, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/65tatjyEeEk
This is stuff🔥🔥🔥
HEAT DAWG
🔥🔥🔥!!
i am not here for promotion, advertisement, or financial benefit. i am just asking the hip-hop community to review and leave feedback on the song i have made. i do not know if this is the right place on the sub to post my material. so please forgive me if i am wrong and remove the comment. keep in mind i have 0 knowledge in mastering so the audio quality is not the best but it is the best i could get it to after 5 hours of editing. my main focus is expression and lyricism. I used audacity to record and edit the song. The info for the beat and who did what on the song are available in the description of the song. The song itself is not mainstream or marketable by any means as i write about things like psychology and theology or other fields of study and entertainment. i thank you all for your time and please do not sugar coat anything. i am a big boy who takes criticism well. i want that raw and direct constructive critique. https://soundcloud.com/zerozenn/loser
Your rhyme schemes and flow are tight broski you just need better delivery. Frfr your cool bro
Please be specific as I do not know what you mean by better. My retardation and pauses are meant to be there. It is part of my style.
I know it is but your voice weakens kinda in certain areas
How do I keep inflection and tonal shifts without screaming the entire verse? I have a yeti mic and audacity plus I am in poverty so spending 200 dollars for studio time and mastering isn't in my budget.
I know I feel that man lmao. Hmmmmm, you might hafta get louder broski
hmm i can do that but it will be difficult at first to transcribe the emotional tone into a louder function without changing the emotion present. thanks for the advice i will try it out and see what happens.
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Can you check out my track too pls?
i agree with the man below, i think what you can do is try punching in, also learn more mixing skills to boost your sound quality sometimes the perfromance can be there but the mixing of the track is whats going to take it to the next level.
Got any links to help me mix with either audacity or FL21?
Some FRESH creek for yall. [farewellcreek - harlequiN (prod. awgust24)](https://on.soundcloud.com/szt4AsPmbucren8u8)
🕺💃🏻
https://youtu.be/TBEhJ9eXyYQ
Mixing is amazing good shit
trying my best sir.. appreciate it
Great melodic flows, mixing as well as over a beat that fits in the vibe and lyrics. Good stuff. Here’s my track if you’d like to listen: https://open.spotify.com/track/2GAI28nteM2vPSZU1Uke7i?si=021fb102a9e74298
New playlist oriented towards up and coming artist looking for new talents and listeners alike all music is welcomed [Friend$](https://open.spotify.com/playlist/2VuwagUcRWAPFXHXUV60Cz?si=IiorXZ0oQ8CIDofeIe5hsQ)
https://on.soundcloud.com/T4n96ULX1cBsK8y5A I poured my heart out into this one
the historical contents lead into a meaning for the word choices. the sentence structure is well formed. the emotion involved with the subject matter and the reason/justification for expression is perfect. outside of my own views this needs some more production work. i got an associate with over 15 years of master experience if you want i can ask him if he would be willing to work with you. he might be able to clean up this track if you have the recordings still or just rerecord the vocals and let my associate know what you are looking for in the contexts of editing. other than that i think you made a beautiful song that a lot of those in suffering would be relieved to experience.
Thank you very much bro :)
Love the flow.
Thank you :)
WESTSIDE GUNN TYPE BEAT ~ MOB, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/McKFozTUC_I
Listen to GRIMREAPER by GOTHICGODPURPLE on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/3fZSw
The vocals are a bit quiet, but if it were a bit louder I would enjoy it
https://youtu.be/mm9Nd47MjbM
Marching Band Goes Electro Marching Band Sound + Hip Hop/Trap Beat + Colonel Bogey Whistle song + Vaughn Monroe sound Off "the Duck worth Chant" = LeWelsch - Marching Band Goes Electro https://youtu.be/96sxgakcin8 Company Halt! Have a Great Sunday LeWelsch
(FREE) ASAP ROCKY x CLAMS CASINO x LIL B CLOUD RAP TYPE BEAT - UTOPIA, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/GyoCpjE_4e4
(FREE) ASAP ROCKY x CLAMS CASINO x LIL B CLOUD RAP TYPE BEAT - UTOPIA, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/GyoCpjE_4e4
https://youtu.be/ZOTp108Rk6k
just dropped this yesterday on my birthday show some love🖤🎵 ALONE IN AN EMPTY HOME https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLHzNaThu3XdMDlULVj6LDULEHW6oFbNq9
this is my new song of the day lmk what everyone thinks https://youtu.be/RfpDSLqibx8
[sorry- $in$idious](https://spotify.link/FYHPD4yMxyb)
[All platforms](https://linktr.ee/sinsidious)
Here's a beat that I made, inspired by The Talos Principle game, you guys can use it at will, just give a shoutout in description or something https://youtu.be/GD9_TmLl_l0
new track https://soundcloud.com/jamesadelic/make-it-out?si=151b475d94914518bbdb89c49844f834&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing, working on mixing songs for a tape :)
Edn3rd-Pulling Up [https://youtu.be/cT-954FobYA](https://youtu.be/cT-954FobYA)
Hit me up if you’re feeling these! Looking for some rhymers!! ✌️ Listen On SoundCloud: https://on.soundcloud.com/ke18MyP51Z2soeG4A
but if it were a bit louder I would enjoy it
Glitchy self produced hiphop future rap. Feedback appreciate and comment your songs ill check em out! https://youtu.be/TiwBU725SVo
Yoo just dropped a drill song!! Check it out and let me know what you think :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4C1bcQJskhc