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Finally, something out of the box, maybe the mix with the distorted instrument could do it better qith the male vocal, the female vocals sits better in that range of frecuencies. Nice!
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Only thing I'd change would be where the vocals sit on the stereo field. Other than that beat is fire, your flows are dope, the energy is definitely there... This is fire bro!
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
my new song; https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
more alternative/indie than anything, more hip hop oriented stuff on the way tho, bare w me
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I definitely heard this somewhere.. On some stream maybe..? Only thing I have for you is that the reverb on the vocal is a tad bit overbearing. I like your stepping, your flow, the beat is dope... So, if you polish up that vocal mix you'll have a great track!
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Yo, I really enjoyed this beat man! I don’t have any critiques, became an instant fan of this one. Love the visuals too for the video. Really chill, vibey stuff. Great job!
Your style feels really underground! I like that it's self-produced, aesthetically it leans towards SpaceGhostPurrp, not fully with the Memphis-influence but just in the mood and emotions I feel when listening to it. I really love the references to John Elway and Peyton Manning. I like that the music has a bit of a humorous edge to it, reminds me of Big Baby Scumbag and I think there's a large audience for that. Great video & outro too!! Keep it up
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
i can appreciate that description lol my man this is a banger though, one thing i'd do is maybe do a beat switch half way through since it's pretty much just 4 mins of you snappin off, a beat switch might keep some engaged longer
would appreciate feedback, unbiased first thoughts that come to mind when listing to this track
[https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1Dx-XxL2h6NiuJwwu4YcJIz4m1mepDbjJ](https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1Dx-XxL2h6NiuJwwu4YcJIz4m1mepDbjJ)
thank you
Hey guys, my third song is taking a bit longer to master than expected so I think I'm just gonna post my current track Starlight for another week, hopefully I can get the next one up soon!
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[https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/starlight-prod-abe](https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/starlight-prod-abe)
Okay... very minimal beat here. I like that you took the chance and changed it to drill midway. Mix is lacking a lot energy-wise. Bass is super low and it's presence is overshadowed by every other element making seem as an annoyance to deal with. Big clipping around 0:56 although that might also be a product of the mp4's creation.
I don't want to flood you with too many faults and ''change this, change that'' things so keep a couple of the tips I just mentioned and see if you can pay some extra attention on those aspects of your next beat. Much love and keep at it. Practice makes perfect!
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Hi, thanks for your thoughts, I appreciate it... that big clipping is caused by the video somehow, the audio doesn't have that, annoying but tbh I didn't bother on trying to remove before upload...
Your beat is super nice, relaxing and I like especially the drums... Great work, lookin forward for more
PS. I fw the video hard, very cool visuals
Have a nice Sunday :)
This is good. I’m not the biggest fan of the best switch but both halves make for a great sound. I like what you do with the drums. Run with it.
https://on.soundcloud.com/ZuJ51wKJqPjG5khB6
Please give me constructive feedback I’m not looking for people to be nice. Thanks alot
Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it.
Regarding yours, I like the sound selection a lot, this kinda experimental vibe gave me a good impression, what I would add is some variation tho, after a while I got a bit tired by that pluck and the repetitive drums, other than that, solid beat, keep it up.
Nasty loop! I'd like some more colour and energy from the drums and that that violin that comes in is a bit dissonant which is not always a bad thing but in this case I think it's a tad bit too dissonant. Great sound selection and it's definitely a strong beat. Great for someone to hop on and do their thing. Good stuf my G!
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Thanks for taking the time it took me hours to try to make them fall into pitch, but it was my best try on my sampler. I'm not a trained musician, so I do it by feeling. But I really appreciate your hints. I had the same feeling about the pitch. The set grows on energy if you listen to the third and fourth beats.
Regarding yours, I liked the percussion sounds it is too lofi type for me, but if you're pointing into that direction, it sounds great. The only recommendation from my taste is a little if reverb in the snare fills that will give them a short tail that suits better in the mix.
Love the bassline that drives throughout the song. Good work on the hi-hat patterns too but I felt they sounded a little tinny and could be compressed more. Bars & album cover are dope too.
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Hey guys, haven't tapped in here for a while but I'd love to swap ears with somebody again.
Here's my latest, drop yours below and I'll check it out ! Bless
[cITY oF [ᵗᴴᴱ] lEGENDs͓̽ (prod. me)](https://soundcloud.com/thewillpike/city-of-legends)
Thanks mane yea it's hard with the lower octaves to sacrifice clarity over letting the lowend of the both vox and the beat come thru.
This is fuckin hard bro, definitely up my alley. I think your delivery needs a bit more work though, not like you are tripping over yourself too much or your presence is lacking, just try messing with your flow and vocal inflections a bit to get your words across a bit more natural. All aside I fw you heavy brother keep going with it !
I like the sound. I would say make your voice louder, it’s a bit hard to hear.
Here’s mine, my second beat I’m trying to Improve what I’m the worst at.
https://on.soundcloud.com/ZuJ51wKJqPjG5khB6
Thanks for peepin. Good shit man keep at it, it'll take a while til you get your beat mix to your liking, I would say add some more variation and counter melodies, keep going.
this is cool.. got like a dark vibe to it.. the beat is cool.. got subtle drill like bass slides.. kicks sound present.. drum pattern got a solid groove.. really achieved the dark hip hop vibes.. keep at it bro.
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Ay brother I appreciate ya peepin, and glad you fw the vibe / production.
I checked out your latest one on SoundCloud called "Sunday Funkshuwei" and I love it. Great beat selection, your flow rides this so well, love how the mix captures that early Joey badass Era, if not just raw 90s east coast boombap. Lot of uplifting bars fr, and your delivery is on point both with your vocal tones between the hook and verses. Dope shit brother!
Style of your voice is really cool, it creates this real nice terror-filled verse where it feels like the rapper is hanging out in the shadows and is preaching about bad habits. The way your vocals is layered is amazing, I really like how well the takes are mixed with one another. The ending was ill too, as it ties a bow on everything. Production feels like Metro Boomin & Travis Scott linked up. Keep killing it
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Ay aha thanks hella again astro, dope seeing you're still STEADY killing this style you got. Really found your niche with the sound and beat selection. Think I said this a couple times in the past but you remind me so much of Sir Michael Rocks (who I grew up listenin to) which speaks to me hella. Mix is clean as hell, bars are witty and natural af, and adlibs act perfect with the verse.
> What are the things youd like feedback on?
Anything and everything man.
I think you could do with working on how many syllables you squeeze into each line. At around 0:55 with the life line it sounds a bit clunky to me and the following line has less syllables. If you were more consistent there I think you'd be smoother over the beat.
I like the like video game sounds, id like the drum sounds to be a little more hq/rich though, and theres def a rhythm to it, but i think i needs more like swing or bounce. Ooh yeah thats one of the lines that stands out to me to, appreciate you thank you!
the piano keys do have a west coast vibe in its sound and the melody.. the drums sound good... cool chord progression and the melodies are fire. kicks and snares patterns are nice.. got a chill groove.
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
I really like the beat, sounds like it has a heavy Latin-music influence that gives it this real unique feel that I get from listening to old Cypress Hill records. The bass on this beat is hard, and really gives the power to the track that makes it feel like a real mainstream track. Quality on the video is extremely good. The old-school VHS effect was ill too, crazy some people may not know what that is, I think having some shots in color would also be a good touch. Right now it gives me the Mo Bamba feel and I love that it's a bilingual track. Dope video, dope song
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
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latest release titled “Bankrolls” been working on this song since 2020, after going thru multiple versions, re-writing/re-recording I stopped tryna chase the perfect version of this song & went with what felt good
https://youtu.be/M6B6V3GmKFs
The singing on the chorus is really good. Shows your versatility as an artist. I love how thematically connected the entire music video is, and it's shot in extremely good quality. Audio quality is great, and the lyricism is there. Really like how you utilized a post-chorus bridge to drive home the point of the track and create something easily repeatable for the listener. Flow-wise reminds me a lot of Gambino. Glad to see you put so much effort into your craft
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Your flow is really dope, it is fast paced and is a good addition to the instrumental. Your rhyme scheme is dope as well with well thought out schemes that still work with the rest of the track.
The beat is really hard, the melody has a menacing trap feel but also feels kind of relaxing in the chord progression, so when the beat drops the track just goes insane with nice sound selection for the drums and hard 808s that slide throughout the track. I think I’ve reviewed this before but even after a second listen I still really fw the song!
I made this experimental chillhop type beat and would appreciate any feedback:
https://youtu.be/SU4njXQODxs
Much love Flamethrower!! Loving this beat. It's definitely very ethereal, the beat drop is ill and feels like some late-90s R&B track combining elements of hip-hop. I like that this one feels like it's leaning in more of a retro PartyNextDoor mood. It sounds like a love song you hear at 2AM on the radio that changes your life. Your style has a lot of mainstream potential, keep on it!!
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You probably know what to expect from me at this point.
Beeeeeat.
If you've never seen "Demon of Steel: Battle of the Great Demon Beasts", don't.
I've cut a 2 hour film into the 2 minutes that didn't suck. Just for you.
https://youtu.be/Lkrdi11KyZw
Dope, too bad the movie wasn’t a good watch lol. This beat fits really well with the animation though. Definitely feels like a fight theme haha. Really love your stuff, as usual. I wonder if you’ve ever considered putting the name of the anime you use in the title of the beats? Maybe it’d be a way to build up more of a niche audience if your beats appeared when people were searching for certain animes. Really great work!
Here’s my new song, more alternative than anything but I got more hiphop oriented stuff on the way: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
Weird in a nice way, not my type of hip-hop to claim knowledge about it, keep track of the mix in the high end. The hats and the snare are too bright for my ears. Nice job!
lol i've always liked that concept though, mechs with a sort of biological sense to them, like evangelion or the Big O, or in a weird way, Attack on Titan.
anyway, good edit, i feel like i watched a whole film that didn't suck, the beat was very fitting. i'd be interested to hear what manner of vocalist you'd get on that. i could definitely hear a danny brown or jpeg type of spitter on this. don't know if that's a sample for the melody but it's fire, sounds well chopped
my own joint, XGRESSIONS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCX8XbkbJ8A
Kept it nice and simple. Let me know what you think & any feedback/support is appreciated.
[https://youtu.be/2gv88o3coSo](https://youtu.be/2gv88o3coSo)
Nice work! It is nice and simple but it’s got a nice eerie quality to it as well, and the drums are super hard. Reminds me of suicideboys beats a bit. Great job!
Here’s my latest, it’s more alternative than anything but I got more hip hop coming soon: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
Yoo thanks for the feedback.
Feedback: make whatever music you want to make, being diverse is a great thing. The instrumental is pretty chill and with your vocals, the track sounds chill & dark at the same time making the track even more interesting. Nice work and keep it up 💯
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how do u like my nee one?
https://soundcloud.com/zmr4052/another-planet-m/s-kLufUaOZPj4?si=ae249990ee614f0b8c67972d66f5c40e&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
vibey man! i would like to hear a lil more depth and panning in certain elements since that would make the beat a lil more trippy. some claps dont seem to be a lil off beat too.
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdnzhuepaTk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdnzhuepaTk) here's mine!
That sub bass that comes in around 0:50 is very crispy and clipping so you ought to tidy that up. Honestly, I love the melody. It has a great feel to it. It's just the mix that you need to fix. I feel that you haven't used any eq on... well most parts of the beat. So, all in all... great idea. Great melody, add some more magic to the drums. More swing, more bounce, clean that low end, polish that mix and you'll be on the right track. Bless
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
I listened to the first one. This beat is good, man! The orchestral feel of the melody/ sample is hard and the drums have a sampled record feel with hard hitting sounds and a dope pattern.
I also really like the bassline in the second beat with it being really diverse in how many notes there are!
Usually I prefer short intros but for this one I would've liked something a bit longer. Vocal chop is super sexy and ethereal! I think that, at least if I'm understanding your vision here, it would be better to slow down the tempo and go for different drums. For some reason I get the feeling that you are going for a dreamy and super chill experience with this track but that's just a hunch. So yeah, these are a couple of things I can give you. Is this a work in progress?
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Thanks! I didn’t have a vision for this, the 94 bpm was intentional as a boom bap tempo, and the drums: hi-hat and snare was from ‘Yo Mutha by Steady B and the kick was from ‘Pee-Wee Dance’ by Joeski Love, honestly I just loved the sounds!
This beat is beautiful, the synths are nice with an overall nice melody and chord progression. The other instruments are very good compliments to the main melody. The bassline is subtle and works with the melody.
The drums are really good, the kick and snare are good sounds themselves sounding like a sampled lo fidelity 70s song with a nice sound but adding the additional percussion was amazing with nice hi hats and clav that comes in every once in a while and the drum roll is also nice! Overall this track feels like the video, a night time setting in a busy vibrant city!
first time I made a beat on my phone. i had abstinence because i couldn't work with my mpc. so I chopped up and looped some soul into a nicholas craven beat
https://on.soundcloud.com/PJAFa2rVaNRonhPJ6
edit: i dont know how to mix or anything on the phone, just chop and sequence. 🔪🔪🔪
Nice job esp for working off your phone! Love the sample. I don’t really have much of a critique, it’s quite short and simple overall but I enjoyed it. Nice work!
Here’s my latest, more alternative than anything, I’ve got more hip hop oriented stuff on the way tho: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
Thanks!!
Man i like this alot!! Gives me a foo fighters vibe! I love the guitar. I longed a little for a couple of drum rolls and a distorted solo guitar that plays along with the main lead. makes me want to play in bands again! nice!
So since mixing is out of the question I don't think I have much to add to this. I really like the chops and the arrangement. I could definitely hear some Boldy James on this. Or maybe even some MF Doom, right? Also, since you messaged mixing, yeah you could definitely add your ''colours'' to the sample through mixing to really make it yours but man... it's still really good as it is. I fuck with this
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Thanks man!! means a lot. makes me wonder if I should touch it with some mixing or move on to the next one.
i like everything about your beat, was completely taken in by the music and the video. fits great together. and those keys, bass with those drums is like perfection. really liked this one!
There's only one answer to that. If it feels right right now and, If it felt right before then unto the next. In risk of sounding corny and cliche, I find that it's best to follow your instincts and your intuition when it comes to tackling these questions
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKl2IAB3QP4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKl2IAB3QP4)
"Monarchy" - Dreamville type beat, super hyped with this one lemme know what y'all think
That's some crazy melody but I definitely see where you're going with. Sound selection is a bit off, especially that clap and I'm not sure about the bass. I mean... it's hella hype and explosive so I guess it fits. Yeah bro, drums need fixing here and you'll see that it's mostly an issue with your choices on the sounds you used rather than the mixing itself. Other than that, this would definitely be killed by Dreamville. I think you achieved what you were going for, for the most part. Keep at it!
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Appreciate that. I originally made the beat with my volume turned down all the way cause I like starting my beats like that, helps me be more creative with melodies. That also led to some weird sound choices, I can agree to that. Appreciate the feedback, I’ll check yours out right now
>not a really big fan of the sound selection used in this beat.. I feel like the first lead synth sounds too generic.. or some effect can go on it to sound better.. does got a Dreamville vibe to it tho.. this is nice man, keep at it
>
>check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
I like the spirit of this beat, especially the 808s. The horn instrument is really cool, part of it feels slightly out-of-tune but I'm by no means an expert in that area so not 100% sure. Drums are really nice, sounds like you could've built a few different melodies over those drums and it would've come out good. Definitely feels like a haunting track!
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
yeah this is groovy, there's lowkey a lot going on but it doesn't sound "busy" if that makes sense. I love this dog, good work. outro is just straight butter
my own joint, XGRESSIONS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCX8XbkbJ8A
That outro was beautiful. Feel like I could've listened to that for 20 minutes alone. The overall atmosphere on this beat works really well, it has a certain endearing quality to it that just makes it fun to listen to. Feels like listening to music with the girl of your dreams in your room. I think this one is dope! Would love to hear it as a full track. I can't think of an artist this beat particularly reminds me of, but I do see it having a lot of versatility with lots of different artists. Mixing is good, nothing I would change about this
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
That intro!!!!! Is the guitar real or a vst? I'm talking specifically about the one that plays around 0:37 and 1:50. Not that it matters, just for the sake of clarity. This dope bro. That heavy lead that you're using is not agreeing with my ears but that's definitely preference. I love the choices you made in regards to your drum sounds. This is dope bro. Keep it up!
Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
thanks man! it's a vst this time, I normally record my own guitar. but didn't have it with me at that time.
i love the vibe in your beat man, i would let it knock harder, but thats me just loving everything loud and nasty. definately a vibe andw awesome bass
yoo this is cool... that melody is catchy.. the drums is nice.. kicks is nice.. snares got a good sound too.. cool guitar transition.. this is really energetic feel to it.. sounds like a rager at a festival honestly.. I enjoy this one.
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
I usually come here for mixing feedback but I'd like to know how this makes you feel...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
this sounds like the music the song you would choose for a compilation video of all the greatest moments in your life. love how the Melodies here are filled with spacey ethereal keys & that bass line is simple but fire asf
This beat is insanely dope. Feels like something Pharrell Williams & Snoop Dogg would do together. Really ill lyrically, the style reminds me of 2014-Earl Sweatshirt & Mac Miller, like something on Mac's Faces mixtape. Feels lowkey like drugged out bars and the overall way that you give the delivery is dope. I think the vocals feel a bit too loud for the beat, but style wise I think you've got it down to a tee. Also reminds me of FBZ and Underachievers. Lots of potential for you to take it big
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
love the beat selection & overall vibe of the song here fam. I think one thing that would improve your sound is putting a little more emphasis on your lyrics are you’re delivering them, certain moments sounded a little slurry which makes it a lil difficult to distinguish what you’re saying. also you’re voice kinda reminds of Isaac Zale
hey this is cool.. I feel like the lyrics are cool.. you touch up on some cool words and images.. the rhyme schemes tell a cool story.. I feel like the flow can be better.. kind of sounds you r reading rather than just rhyming from memory.. idk just felt like flow could of been better.. but cool rhymes.. keep it up
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
[https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7](https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7)
YouTube
[https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA](https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA)
SoundCloud
[https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha](https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha)
Thank you! Yeee was deff reading i gotta work on that though lol.
How can i not be down for a song with "Funk" in the name? Its pretty dope bars i like the change up section a lot too.
Here's a darker lofi sort of beat I'd love to hear your thoughts on. Had it described as similar to OG Gorillaz https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C_v9Xhbe0BocGq_jJTS3kiKYS-G96KxV/view?usp=drivesdk
Happy to return feedback :)
I definitely hear Gorillaz on this! Also feels like a new-age interpretation on a Kool & The Gang song. At 1:36 I really love that sequencing, it's very Jazzy and feels like Madlib on Madvillainy or even Tyler, the Creator on Flower Boy. The dialogue throughout it makes it feel like concept art, and the mix on it is very bright, and vibrant without feeling like it's been stripped of its soul and what makes it authentic
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Thank you once again for such detailed and interesting feedback! I've had my stuff compared to Tyler before, it's not intentional but it's definitely cool to be compared with the likes of him and madlib.
Your track: real nice intro, letting the listener soak in the opening of the beat before you come in like a storm lol. Some nice bars in there too, flow was consistent and interesting and the switch ups were nice. Good job! :)
Started putting out my lofi beats on Spotify recently. This is my newest release. :)
https://open.spotify.com/track/78tvuMQT18NFS3eBYU34Zw?si=W7en3ez_TNOAp89-tOww7Q
I'm really loving the sound of kids playing in the background, it brings a lot of life to the beat. Musically this is very impressive, the way that the piano notes, and bass both play together feels like they're in complete concert the entire time. Very slow-moving, but not boring, even the fade-in on the music I thought was a nice touch. This track shows lots of talent, it's mixed nice
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Made a beat that really reminded me of The Weeknd's Heartless. Would love opinions and do leave your stuff in the replies to. We all gonna make it bros <3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLJzpQdj10c
this is cool.. I like the sound selection.. the synths got a real cool sound to it.. like its electric.. the supporting sounds are fire too.. I like the layers of melody.. they all go together nicely.. arrangement is fire.. cool transitions.. this is a dope beat..
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Was not expecting that beat drop at all. Definitely feels like some 80s electro-rock made a baby with some modern hip-hop. Surprised that none of the synths sound muddy and the mixing feels so clear. Definitely has this nice party aesthetic to it that could be easily turned into either a more R&B-centric or traditional rap-centric track. Love all the progressions on the beat, it's fast paced and fun to listen to
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
this beat is cool... got a heavy PHONK feel to it.. drums sound dope.. kicks got a good sound.. hi hats and claps/snare is sick.. drum beat got a chill groove.. simple melody is fire too.. real nice with the vocals over it too..
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat.
Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha)
Spotify
https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7
YouTube
https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
https://on.soundcloud.com/S33jZqBvncjfjhNH8
This is my second beat. I am brand new and I am completely self taught. I don’t expect this to be good, but me day I want to get there. Negative constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated! Returning all feedback.
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https://on.soundcloud.com/BpYh2qFpCd6NvTXAA dark trap song with big name feat i got coming soon
Finally, something out of the box, maybe the mix with the distorted instrument could do it better qith the male vocal, the female vocals sits better in that range of frecuencies. Nice!
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Only thing I'd change would be where the vocals sit on the stereo field. Other than that beat is fire, your flows are dope, the energy is definitely there... This is fire bro! Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
(FREE) ASAP ROCKY x CLAMS CASINO x LIL B CLOUD RAP TYPE BEAT - DROWNING, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/-ABxgCRqJKY
my new song; https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA more alternative/indie than anything, more hip hop oriented stuff on the way tho, bare w me WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK
I definitely heard this somewhere.. On some stream maybe..? Only thing I have for you is that the reverb on the vocal is a tad bit overbearing. I like your stepping, your flow, the beat is dope... So, if you polish up that vocal mix you'll have a great track! Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Yo, I really enjoyed this beat man! I don’t have any critiques, became an instant fan of this one. Love the visuals too for the video. Really chill, vibey stuff. Great job!
new video from EP, XGRESSIONS written and produced by me will return all feedback, let me have it folks https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCX8XbkbJ8A
Your style feels really underground! I like that it's self-produced, aesthetically it leans towards SpaceGhostPurrp, not fully with the Memphis-influence but just in the mood and emotions I feel when listening to it. I really love the references to John Elway and Peyton Manning. I like that the music has a bit of a humorous edge to it, reminds me of Big Baby Scumbag and I think there's a large audience for that. Great video & outro too!! Keep it up Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
i can appreciate that description lol my man this is a banger though, one thing i'd do is maybe do a beat switch half way through since it's pretty much just 4 mins of you snappin off, a beat switch might keep some engaged longer
That's a great idea!!
would appreciate feedback, unbiased first thoughts that come to mind when listing to this track [https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1Dx-XxL2h6NiuJwwu4YcJIz4m1mepDbjJ](https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1Dx-XxL2h6NiuJwwu4YcJIz4m1mepDbjJ) thank you
Mix sounding clean, love the abstract flow and lyrical content
>yvngx thank u for ur time and feed back
What do u think? Returning all feedback https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HjEWJPd_PlgOdASwlSVrFUMXkqyLYclK/view?usp=drivesdk
Hey guys, my third song is taking a bit longer to master than expected so I think I'm just gonna post my current track Starlight for another week, hopefully I can get the next one up soon! **Returning All Feedback!** [https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/starlight-prod-abe](https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/starlight-prod-abe)
Nice sample, the mix is pretty good too.
[free] clams casino + asap rocky type beat 2023 ~ suicidal thoughts , any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/YJo4SuLR40w
First beat I made after some time of inactivity, be brutally honest... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1PgEglSq9hY Will return all feedback!!
Chords are cool...there's ghostly/space age quality to them and the best works without the drill transition
Bice transition to the 808 glides! Not expected at all.
Okay... very minimal beat here. I like that you took the chance and changed it to drill midway. Mix is lacking a lot energy-wise. Bass is super low and it's presence is overshadowed by every other element making seem as an annoyance to deal with. Big clipping around 0:56 although that might also be a product of the mp4's creation. I don't want to flood you with too many faults and ''change this, change that'' things so keep a couple of the tips I just mentioned and see if you can pay some extra attention on those aspects of your next beat. Much love and keep at it. Practice makes perfect! Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Hi, thanks for your thoughts, I appreciate it... that big clipping is caused by the video somehow, the audio doesn't have that, annoying but tbh I didn't bother on trying to remove before upload... Your beat is super nice, relaxing and I like especially the drums... Great work, lookin forward for more PS. I fw the video hard, very cool visuals Have a nice Sunday :)
This is good. I’m not the biggest fan of the best switch but both halves make for a great sound. I like what you do with the drums. Run with it. https://on.soundcloud.com/ZuJ51wKJqPjG5khB6 Please give me constructive feedback I’m not looking for people to be nice. Thanks alot
Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it. Regarding yours, I like the sound selection a lot, this kinda experimental vibe gave me a good impression, what I would add is some variation tho, after a while I got a bit tired by that pluck and the repetitive drums, other than that, solid beat, keep it up.
Boombap beats looking for mcs to collab https://youtu.be/F3AHuSc6c6M
Nasty loop! I'd like some more colour and energy from the drums and that that violin that comes in is a bit dissonant which is not always a bad thing but in this case I think it's a tad bit too dissonant. Great sound selection and it's definitely a strong beat. Great for someone to hop on and do their thing. Good stuf my G! Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Oh it's a whole beat tape... hold up!
Thanks for taking the time it took me hours to try to make them fall into pitch, but it was my best try on my sampler. I'm not a trained musician, so I do it by feeling. But I really appreciate your hints. I had the same feeling about the pitch. The set grows on energy if you listen to the third and fourth beats. Regarding yours, I liked the percussion sounds it is too lofi type for me, but if you're pointing into that direction, it sounds great. The only recommendation from my taste is a little if reverb in the snare fills that will give them a short tail that suits better in the mix.
The 16TH song on my album! https://youtu.be/2f2BV7RD0WA RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK!
Love the bassline that drives throughout the song. Good work on the hi-hat patterns too but I felt they sounded a little tinny and could be compressed more. Bars & album cover are dope too.
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Hey guys, haven't tapped in here for a while but I'd love to swap ears with somebody again. Here's my latest, drop yours below and I'll check it out ! Bless [cITY oF [ᵗᴴᴱ] lEGENDs͓̽ (prod. me)](https://soundcloud.com/thewillpike/city-of-legends)
Sick vibe, it all fits together really nice. If i had to pick something out the mix could be cleaner. Heres mine https://on.soundcloud.com/wzREa
Thanks mane yea it's hard with the lower octaves to sacrifice clarity over letting the lowend of the both vox and the beat come thru. This is fuckin hard bro, definitely up my alley. I think your delivery needs a bit more work though, not like you are tripping over yourself too much or your presence is lacking, just try messing with your flow and vocal inflections a bit to get your words across a bit more natural. All aside I fw you heavy brother keep going with it !
i feel that lol oh yeah no i know what you mean, i definitely appreciate the feedback and listen and that you fw it!!
I like the sound. I would say make your voice louder, it’s a bit hard to hear. Here’s mine, my second beat I’m trying to Improve what I’m the worst at. https://on.soundcloud.com/ZuJ51wKJqPjG5khB6
Thanks for peepin. Good shit man keep at it, it'll take a while til you get your beat mix to your liking, I would say add some more variation and counter melodies, keep going.
this is cool.. got like a dark vibe to it.. the beat is cool.. got subtle drill like bass slides.. kicks sound present.. drum pattern got a solid groove.. really achieved the dark hip hop vibes.. keep at it bro. check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Ay brother I appreciate ya peepin, and glad you fw the vibe / production. I checked out your latest one on SoundCloud called "Sunday Funkshuwei" and I love it. Great beat selection, your flow rides this so well, love how the mix captures that early Joey badass Era, if not just raw 90s east coast boombap. Lot of uplifting bars fr, and your delivery is on point both with your vocal tones between the hook and verses. Dope shit brother!
Style of your voice is really cool, it creates this real nice terror-filled verse where it feels like the rapper is hanging out in the shadows and is preaching about bad habits. The way your vocals is layered is amazing, I really like how well the takes are mixed with one another. The ending was ill too, as it ties a bow on everything. Production feels like Metro Boomin & Travis Scott linked up. Keep killing it Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Ay aha thanks hella again astro, dope seeing you're still STEADY killing this style you got. Really found your niche with the sound and beat selection. Think I said this a couple times in the past but you remind me so much of Sir Michael Rocks (who I grew up listenin to) which speaks to me hella. Mix is clean as hell, bars are witty and natural af, and adlibs act perfect with the verse.
Much love man!! Mikey was a huge influence to me too growing up haha more so Chuckie, but Cool Kids were one of my favorites to listen to
https://soundcloud.com/kane_beats/missing-you-demo-6 Chipmunk soul, 808s and heartbreak kinda inspired sound. Will return all feedback.
What are the things youd like feedback on? Heres mine https://on.soundcloud.com/wzREa
> What are the things youd like feedback on? Anything and everything man. I think you could do with working on how many syllables you squeeze into each line. At around 0:55 with the life line it sounds a bit clunky to me and the following line has less syllables. If you were more consistent there I think you'd be smoother over the beat.
I like the like video game sounds, id like the drum sounds to be a little more hq/rich though, and theres def a rhythm to it, but i think i needs more like swing or bounce. Ooh yeah thats one of the lines that stands out to me to, appreciate you thank you!
WESTSIDE GUNN TYPE BEAT ~ MOB, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/McKFozTUC_I
the sample is a 10/10 for me but something’s off about the way it loops
West Coast Rap / Shoreline Mafia type beat https://on.soundcloud.com/gBYEnFUPtZBmh2t28 Super proud of the outro on this
the piano keys do have a west coast vibe in its sound and the melody.. the drums sound good... cool chord progression and the melodies are fire. kicks and snares patterns are nice.. got a chill groove. check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
(FREE) ASAP ROCKY x CLAMS CASINO x LIL B CLOUD RAP TYPE BEAT - LOST, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/65tatjyEeEk
[Dropped a music video to one of my best tracks yet.](https://youtu.be/xV0TJlcbY1c)
I really like the beat, sounds like it has a heavy Latin-music influence that gives it this real unique feel that I get from listening to old Cypress Hill records. The bass on this beat is hard, and really gives the power to the track that makes it feel like a real mainstream track. Quality on the video is extremely good. The old-school VHS effect was ill too, crazy some people may not know what that is, I think having some shots in color would also be a good touch. Right now it gives me the Mo Bamba feel and I love that it's a bilingual track. Dope video, dope song Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
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dope! I completely missed your response man. Any way I can watch it still?
latest release titled “Bankrolls” been working on this song since 2020, after going thru multiple versions, re-writing/re-recording I stopped tryna chase the perfect version of this song & went with what felt good https://youtu.be/M6B6V3GmKFs
This is a great song, I would definitely feel crazy proud of the result 🔥🔥🔥
The singing on the chorus is really good. Shows your versatility as an artist. I love how thematically connected the entire music video is, and it's shot in extremely good quality. Audio quality is great, and the lyricism is there. Really like how you utilized a post-chorus bridge to drive home the point of the track and create something easily repeatable for the listener. Flow-wise reminds me a lot of Gambino. Glad to see you put so much effort into your craft Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Tell me what your thoughts are: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward Returning all feedback!!!
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My guy!!!!
bro that flow is nuts, you murdered this
Thank you so much fam!!
Your flow is really dope, it is fast paced and is a good addition to the instrumental. Your rhyme scheme is dope as well with well thought out schemes that still work with the rest of the track. The beat is really hard, the melody has a menacing trap feel but also feels kind of relaxing in the chord progression, so when the beat drops the track just goes insane with nice sound selection for the drums and hard 808s that slide throughout the track. I think I’ve reviewed this before but even after a second listen I still really fw the song! I made this experimental chillhop type beat and would appreciate any feedback: https://youtu.be/SU4njXQODxs
Much love Flamethrower!! Loving this beat. It's definitely very ethereal, the beat drop is ill and feels like some late-90s R&B track combining elements of hip-hop. I like that this one feels like it's leaning in more of a retro PartyNextDoor mood. It sounds like a love song you hear at 2AM on the radio that changes your life. Your style has a lot of mainstream potential, keep on it!!
Thanks, man! I really appreciate it.
Big things on your horizon Flamethrower!!
Not my type of hiphop, but I like it! I loved the hats and the voice placement in the mix!
Thank you for being honest!
Returning all feedback. You probably know what to expect from me at this point. Beeeeeat. If you've never seen "Demon of Steel: Battle of the Great Demon Beasts", don't. I've cut a 2 hour film into the 2 minutes that didn't suck. Just for you. https://youtu.be/Lkrdi11KyZw
Dope, too bad the movie wasn’t a good watch lol. This beat fits really well with the animation though. Definitely feels like a fight theme haha. Really love your stuff, as usual. I wonder if you’ve ever considered putting the name of the anime you use in the title of the beats? Maybe it’d be a way to build up more of a niche audience if your beats appeared when people were searching for certain animes. Really great work! Here’s my new song, more alternative than anything but I got more hiphop oriented stuff on the way: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
Weird in a nice way, not my type of hip-hop to claim knowledge about it, keep track of the mix in the high end. The hats and the snare are too bright for my ears. Nice job!
lol i've always liked that concept though, mechs with a sort of biological sense to them, like evangelion or the Big O, or in a weird way, Attack on Titan. anyway, good edit, i feel like i watched a whole film that didn't suck, the beat was very fitting. i'd be interested to hear what manner of vocalist you'd get on that. i could definitely hear a danny brown or jpeg type of spitter on this. don't know if that's a sample for the melody but it's fire, sounds well chopped my own joint, XGRESSIONS https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCX8XbkbJ8A
Kept it nice and simple. Let me know what you think & any feedback/support is appreciated. [https://youtu.be/2gv88o3coSo](https://youtu.be/2gv88o3coSo)
Nice work! It is nice and simple but it’s got a nice eerie quality to it as well, and the drums are super hard. Reminds me of suicideboys beats a bit. Great job! Here’s my latest, it’s more alternative than anything but I got more hip hop coming soon: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
Yoo thanks for the feedback. Feedback: make whatever music you want to make, being diverse is a great thing. The instrumental is pretty chill and with your vocals, the track sounds chill & dark at the same time making the track even more interesting. Nice work and keep it up 💯
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how do u like my nee one? https://soundcloud.com/zmr4052/another-planet-m/s-kLufUaOZPj4?si=ae249990ee614f0b8c67972d66f5c40e&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
vibey man! i would like to hear a lil more depth and panning in certain elements since that would make the beat a lil more trippy. some claps dont seem to be a lil off beat too. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdnzhuepaTk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdnzhuepaTk) here's mine!
thanks man. ur shit is super cool and hard. i like that u do stuff which is not standard. i try to do the same
Nice! The hats are killing my ears!
thanks, ill should improve them
That sub bass that comes in around 0:50 is very crispy and clipping so you ought to tidy that up. Honestly, I love the melody. It has a great feel to it. It's just the mix that you need to fix. I feel that you haven't used any eq on... well most parts of the beat. So, all in all... great idea. Great melody, add some more magic to the drums. More swing, more bounce, clean that low end, polish that mix and you'll be on the right track. Bless Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
thanks man, ill try to improve my mix. youre right i need to work on that. commented ur youtub vid. your beat is crazy good
I made this experimental chillhop beat and would appreciate any feedback: https://youtu.be/SU4njXQODxs Returning All Feedback!
you bring really dreamy chill beats fr🔥not much feedback, i'm listening to my phone. possibly that your snare needs to be lowered a little in volume.
Thanks! Do you have anything you want me to review?
Bice 80 synth aoynd I feel in a terminator movie. Maybe the mix in the highs sounds too harsh.
Thanks! Do you have anything you want me to review?
https://youtu.be/F3AHuSc6c6M
I listened to the first one. This beat is good, man! The orchestral feel of the melody/ sample is hard and the drums have a sampled record feel with hard hitting sounds and a dope pattern. I also really like the bassline in the second beat with it being really diverse in how many notes there are!
Usually I prefer short intros but for this one I would've liked something a bit longer. Vocal chop is super sexy and ethereal! I think that, at least if I'm understanding your vision here, it would be better to slow down the tempo and go for different drums. For some reason I get the feeling that you are going for a dreamy and super chill experience with this track but that's just a hunch. So yeah, these are a couple of things I can give you. Is this a work in progress? Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Thanks! I didn’t have a vision for this, the 94 bpm was intentional as a boom bap tempo, and the drums: hi-hat and snare was from ‘Yo Mutha by Steady B and the kick was from ‘Pee-Wee Dance’ by Joeski Love, honestly I just loved the sounds! This beat is beautiful, the synths are nice with an overall nice melody and chord progression. The other instruments are very good compliments to the main melody. The bassline is subtle and works with the melody. The drums are really good, the kick and snare are good sounds themselves sounding like a sampled lo fidelity 70s song with a nice sound but adding the additional percussion was amazing with nice hi hats and clav that comes in every once in a while and the drum roll is also nice! Overall this track feels like the video, a night time setting in a busy vibrant city!
first time I made a beat on my phone. i had abstinence because i couldn't work with my mpc. so I chopped up and looped some soul into a nicholas craven beat https://on.soundcloud.com/PJAFa2rVaNRonhPJ6 edit: i dont know how to mix or anything on the phone, just chop and sequence. 🔪🔪🔪
Nice job esp for working off your phone! Love the sample. I don’t really have much of a critique, it’s quite short and simple overall but I enjoyed it. Nice work! Here’s my latest, more alternative than anything, I’ve got more hip hop oriented stuff on the way tho: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=yJumrFXjRcehYIELVkHbcA
Thanks!! Man i like this alot!! Gives me a foo fighters vibe! I love the guitar. I longed a little for a couple of drum rolls and a distorted solo guitar that plays along with the main lead. makes me want to play in bands again! nice!
So since mixing is out of the question I don't think I have much to add to this. I really like the chops and the arrangement. I could definitely hear some Boldy James on this. Or maybe even some MF Doom, right? Also, since you messaged mixing, yeah you could definitely add your ''colours'' to the sample through mixing to really make it yours but man... it's still really good as it is. I fuck with this Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Thanks man!! means a lot. makes me wonder if I should touch it with some mixing or move on to the next one. i like everything about your beat, was completely taken in by the music and the video. fits great together. and those keys, bass with those drums is like perfection. really liked this one!
There's only one answer to that. If it feels right right now and, If it felt right before then unto the next. In risk of sounding corny and cliche, I find that it's best to follow your instincts and your intuition when it comes to tackling these questions
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKl2IAB3QP4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKl2IAB3QP4) "Monarchy" - Dreamville type beat, super hyped with this one lemme know what y'all think
That's some crazy melody but I definitely see where you're going with. Sound selection is a bit off, especially that clap and I'm not sure about the bass. I mean... it's hella hype and explosive so I guess it fits. Yeah bro, drums need fixing here and you'll see that it's mostly an issue with your choices on the sounds you used rather than the mixing itself. Other than that, this would definitely be killed by Dreamville. I think you achieved what you were going for, for the most part. Keep at it! Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
Appreciate that. I originally made the beat with my volume turned down all the way cause I like starting my beats like that, helps me be more creative with melodies. That also led to some weird sound choices, I can agree to that. Appreciate the feedback, I’ll check yours out right now
That's actually a good tactic. Keeping the Volume at a minimum
>not a really big fan of the sound selection used in this beat.. I feel like the first lead synth sounds too generic.. or some effect can go on it to sound better.. does got a Dreamville vibe to it tho.. this is nice man, keep at it > >check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
I like the spirit of this beat, especially the 808s. The horn instrument is really cool, part of it feels slightly out-of-tune but I'm by no means an expert in that area so not 100% sure. Drums are really nice, sounds like you could've built a few different melodies over those drums and it would've come out good. Definitely feels like a haunting track! Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
thoughts on this one [https://soundcloud.com/xhosk/feel-so-dangerous-1](https://soundcloud.com/xhosk/feel-so-dangerous-1)
yeah this is groovy, there's lowkey a lot going on but it doesn't sound "busy" if that makes sense. I love this dog, good work. outro is just straight butter my own joint, XGRESSIONS https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCX8XbkbJ8A
That outro was beautiful. Feel like I could've listened to that for 20 minutes alone. The overall atmosphere on this beat works really well, it has a certain endearing quality to it that just makes it fun to listen to. Feels like listening to music with the girl of your dreams in your room. I think this one is dope! Would love to hear it as a full track. I can't think of an artist this beat particularly reminds me of, but I do see it having a lot of versatility with lots of different artists. Mixing is good, nothing I would change about this Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Only_Wallace || Scarface Prod By Svgar Beats https://youtu.be/oK5yQ2BjHbY
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdnzhuepaTk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FdnzhuepaTk) EDM X TRAPMETAL TYPE BEAT, let me know what you think!(:
That intro!!!!! Is the guitar real or a vst? I'm talking specifically about the one that plays around 0:37 and 1:50. Not that it matters, just for the sake of clarity. This dope bro. That heavy lead that you're using is not agreeing with my ears but that's definitely preference. I love the choices you made in regards to your drum sounds. This is dope bro. Keep it up! Here's mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&t=131s&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
thanks man! it's a vst this time, I normally record my own guitar. but didn't have it with me at that time. i love the vibe in your beat man, i would let it knock harder, but thats me just loving everything loud and nasty. definately a vibe andw awesome bass
yoo this is cool... that melody is catchy.. the drums is nice.. kicks is nice.. snares got a good sound too.. cool guitar transition.. this is really energetic feel to it.. sounds like a rager at a festival honestly.. I enjoy this one. check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
I usually come here for mixing feedback but I'd like to know how this makes you feel... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvTOBDIE30&ab\_channel=HiddenDragon
This is dope. Really an experience to listen to. I get a feeling of being centered when I listen.
this sounds like the music the song you would choose for a compilation video of all the greatest moments in your life. love how the Melodies here are filled with spacey ethereal keys & that bass line is simple but fire asf
I like how you described it 🐉
beginning is sloppy but gets into some experimental vibes that ive been on https://youtu.be/fQwmoEvdI3Q
This beat is insanely dope. Feels like something Pharrell Williams & Snoop Dogg would do together. Really ill lyrically, the style reminds me of 2014-Earl Sweatshirt & Mac Miller, like something on Mac's Faces mixtape. Feels lowkey like drugged out bars and the overall way that you give the delivery is dope. I think the vocals feel a bit too loud for the beat, but style wise I think you've got it down to a tee. Also reminds me of FBZ and Underachievers. Lots of potential for you to take it big Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
"No More Wishing" [https://on.soundcloud.com/wzREa](https://on.soundcloud.com/wzREa) Returning feedback :)
love the beat selection & overall vibe of the song here fam. I think one thing that would improve your sound is putting a little more emphasis on your lyrics are you’re delivering them, certain moments sounded a little slurry which makes it a lil difficult to distinguish what you’re saying. also you’re voice kinda reminds of Isaac Zale
Ay thank you! Good feedback too, very much appreciated :)
hey this is cool.. I feel like the lyrics are cool.. you touch up on some cool words and images.. the rhyme schemes tell a cool story.. I feel like the flow can be better.. kind of sounds you r reading rather than just rhyming from memory.. idk just felt like flow could of been better.. but cool rhymes.. keep it up check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify [https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7](https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7) YouTube [https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA](https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA) SoundCloud [https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha](https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha)
Thank you! Yeee was deff reading i gotta work on that though lol. How can i not be down for a song with "Funk" in the name? Its pretty dope bars i like the change up section a lot too.
Here's a darker lofi sort of beat I'd love to hear your thoughts on. Had it described as similar to OG Gorillaz https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C_v9Xhbe0BocGq_jJTS3kiKYS-G96KxV/view?usp=drivesdk Happy to return feedback :)
I definitely hear Gorillaz on this! Also feels like a new-age interpretation on a Kool & The Gang song. At 1:36 I really love that sequencing, it's very Jazzy and feels like Madlib on Madvillainy or even Tyler, the Creator on Flower Boy. The dialogue throughout it makes it feel like concept art, and the mix on it is very bright, and vibrant without feeling like it's been stripped of its soul and what makes it authentic Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Thank you once again for such detailed and interesting feedback! I've had my stuff compared to Tyler before, it's not intentional but it's definitely cool to be compared with the likes of him and madlib. Your track: real nice intro, letting the listener soak in the opening of the beat before you come in like a storm lol. Some nice bars in there too, flow was consistent and interesting and the switch ups were nice. Good job! :)
Much love to you!! Tyler & Madlib are huge inspirations to me too FWIW. Both of them are legendary at their craft
Started putting out my lofi beats on Spotify recently. This is my newest release. :) https://open.spotify.com/track/78tvuMQT18NFS3eBYU34Zw?si=W7en3ez_TNOAp89-tOww7Q
I'm really loving the sound of kids playing in the background, it brings a lot of life to the beat. Musically this is very impressive, the way that the piano notes, and bass both play together feels like they're in complete concert the entire time. Very slow-moving, but not boring, even the fade-in on the music I thought was a nice touch. This track shows lots of talent, it's mixed nice Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
Made a beat that really reminded me of The Weeknd's Heartless. Would love opinions and do leave your stuff in the replies to. We all gonna make it bros <3 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLJzpQdj10c
this is cool.. I like the sound selection.. the synths got a real cool sound to it.. like its electric.. the supporting sounds are fire too.. I like the layers of melody.. they all go together nicely.. arrangement is fire.. cool transitions.. this is a dope beat.. check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Was not expecting that beat drop at all. Definitely feels like some 80s electro-rock made a baby with some modern hip-hop. Surprised that none of the synths sound muddy and the mixing feels so clear. Definitely has this nice party aesthetic to it that could be easily turned into either a more R&B-centric or traditional rap-centric track. Love all the progressions on the beat, it's fast paced and fun to listen to Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/seventh-ward
https://on.soundcloud.com/pBRqorA5pX9LrhhD6
this beat is cool... got a heavy PHONK feel to it.. drums sound dope.. kicks got a good sound.. hi hats and claps/snare is sick.. drum beat got a chill groove.. simple melody is fire too.. real nice with the vocals over it too.. check out this song from my hip hop album Mr. Mellow's Crazy Ride by Clu. I did the vocals and the mix. Ace Ha on the beat. Clu - Funk Train (Prod. Ace Ha) Spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/57PiSuuEc3eaQqwIHd2UrF?si=cce412b4d6f642a7 YouTube https://youtu.be/l4KFTFwAfNA SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/cluraps/clu-funk-train-prod-ace-ha
Hype Hip Hop Instrumental - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ttdtFHjZRaQ Let me know your thoughts!
https://on.soundcloud.com/S33jZqBvncjfjhNH8 This is my second beat. I am brand new and I am completely self taught. I don’t expect this to be good, but me day I want to get there. Negative constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated! Returning all feedback.