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Yeah I like this, got a chill vibe to it, really like the sleigh bell type sound throughout :), mix is good to.
I tired making a prity hard tune, mix isnt perfect but for my first go im happy :)
https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/smiley
Melodies on this are really impressive. Track definitely has that "youthful energy" on it. I think that the bass used is nice, and sounds professional, but I would've went with something with more of a sub-bass quality so that it can just bring out the best of the synths. Drums are nice too, I personally would turn them up just a little bit. Your beats are always on some futuristic dope stuff!!
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
https://soundcloud.com/dctothaa/crystal_plumage
New track. Looking for suggestions, kinda new to making beats without heavy sampling. Will return feedback
Hey man, love the vibe. Bassline is sick, had me bobbing my head for sure. Left a comment on your SC, see if i can get some others to write some shiiii. Keep at it man, might have to rap over one of these type beats soon i been doing a lot of club shit and need a change up. Speaking of, grateful for any feedback on this please? I am the prod,writer,rapper,singer.
https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
Just shot you a follow man, thanks for the feedback. Checked out that one you linked and a few other songs. I really like your flows and the beats, it’s all pretty creative. Hit me up on there, I’m working on some new stuff
this has no samples??? thats clean it sound ripped from a vinyl. Beat so smooth you could glide on it. intro was tad long but worth the wait you provided a vibe man. Keep cooking cuz this was toasty.
Trying to find a new wave.
[https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan](https://soundcloud.com/mc_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan)
how does this vibe with you?
Only the drums were sampled off vinyl, rest was played with plugins. I like this bro, definitely got a unique sound to it. Maybe add a slight amount of compression to the vocal to make the volume sit together a little more at some points but other than that I think it’s great.
Ayye Gracias for your tiempo appreciate your time and yeet me some beats if you ever feel inclinded to work with a bummy atlanta rapper lol thank you for listening im not an engineer at all but will try to do better with the mix in the future
couldnt DM but there a few i bop to but the one that fit better with a song i have was crystal plummage. lemme know what you think but you have some nice sounds up there man i like what you were doing with falling in love. an no worry i feel you on the slow process lol im trying to get better at it
Aight, yeah idk how to fix that. I’ll hit you up on SoundCloud. Give e a few days to get some stuff together. I work during the day, so only free at night. And if you wanna use the one I posted, you got my permission. I can get you an unmastered version
sounds dope, you capture that sampled feel without sampling I guess... great lofi vibe, sounds warm and soulful, love the contrast in the bodies and how those drums hit.
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thanks bro! This definitely sounds like something DOOM would've hopped on, so mission accomplished. Really like the way you got the drums swinging on this one.
This is real funky music. I'm extremely impressed with how captivating the bass melody is and how much punch the drums pack. I like how gritty the style feels. Like I'm listening to NY State of Mind for the first time again. Great beat!
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Thanks bro! Really feeling the beat and the flow and delivery on this. It’s all dope. I don’t even usually listen to stuff like this, but I’d add it to my playlist. Killed it on the chorus too.
Been pretty excited to drop this one.
Collabo with Passive the Rapper.
I did the production and trippy vocals in the middle.
Passive did all the other vocals.
https://youtu.be/QlKabiptgLg
This fire my dude! Man I love the vocals in the middle and the chops, really nice tone to them. Passive brought it too. Keep at it my guy!
Would love some feedback on this please if you got time:
https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
Thank you thank you. I appreciate it.
Great job on the beat.
That really grimy synth hits really hard.
Flow is nice. Hook is nice.
My only gripe is the vocals sound a little quiet.
Obviously, they're easier to hear/make out on the hook since you strip some of the instruments away. In the verses, on the other hand...
I don't know if that was intentional.
If it wasn't intentional, adding some compression, shaping the EQ a little bit, and/or stripping back some of the reverb might help the vocals pop a little more.
Oooh, that beat is really nice. Wasn't expecting phonk.
I really like the delivery and flow, too.
The lyrics don't really do much for me, but the whole song sounds really professional.
So, and I can see why you get thousands of listens a piece for most of your songs.
I made a new song, I’ve been getting some views, but the save rate hasn’t been to high, so I was wondering what everyone thinks? https://open.spotify.com/track/7ewbIHhcALIvb15Bi3rHJ0?si=z_hPkEU7R5CX-ienxzJpUA
I like the rhythm of it, the interesting development, and the melody. The chorus seems to work, but think that on this particular track, you need to change its pattern more along the track (from minute 1 and on)
Consider adding lyrics to Spotify.
Please let me know what you think about my track, the vocal delivery, and how to make my mix better 🙂
Peace.👌🏽
https://youtu.be/rmjprubjXWw
Nice, airy, open and slow like a good Gunn beat should be. Dig the sounds you used here, it’s got that eerie feel a lot of his tracks do but with an original flavor to it. Great job.
Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ
Wow, this is so dope!!! Really, really smooth pocket that you carved out in the percussion that slides so well with what I'm assuming is the sample. Would love to hear someone rap over this, but it works well as a standalone track without vocals on it too.
I would appreciate your thoughts on my track as well!
[https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY](https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY)
I dig this a lot actually. Really like the ambient, airy, futuristic feel of the beat. Gives me extra terrestrial vibes haha. I think it could use maybe a bit heavier bass? Though it sounds fine as it is now. Nice work!
Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ
This is super dope. Really like all the space and depth you got going on in the beat. Definitely nailed that outerspace vibe. Here's mine: https://soundcloud.com/dctothaa/crystal\_plumage
Great beat overall, I like the melody, the samples, the dynamics, and the development of it.
My only suggestion for you is to add parts with more percussion or high hats on the sides to boost that experimental vibe.
Glad to see you back!! Really diggin that sampled voice, feels like some Otis Redding style music flipped to be something more industrial and modern sounding. The sampled saxophone is hard too and gives it that old-school vintage feeling. Definitely has a tribal feel to it, and like always, I like how it blends vintage styles with futuristic ones
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
First song on my first EP, thought it was fitting to share it. If you like it then check out the rest of the EP, lots of variety in it :)
https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/welcome-to-the-madhouse
Finding a Vibe.
[https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan](https://soundcloud.com/mc_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan)
Hows it coming along?
Just an MC shout out justdan
RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK
dope track... the beat is nice and laid back... really like your vocal delivery, but they get a bit distorted at times, and feel a bit low... just need them to sit better in the mix cause they complement the beat really well otherwise.
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
MF DOOM GOATED so off rip points for the mad villainous. i like how fucking trippy yo beat is fading in an out with the sounds i feel like you matched the vibe well on this one. Vibez man holla if you ever want an MC for something you got chilly sounds.
Thank you for taking the time to listen to mine. Im in no way an engineer or producer but im happy i could provide a vibe we could share for a momento. keep it cooking primo.
I really dig this beat. The way it starts off feels like a classic Charlie Brown Christmas song. I like the direction you went in with your lyrics, and the way that you would sneak in these really dope, heartfelt vocal melodies. Track definitely showcases your talent, I'd say you're on the right path
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
lol i already left feedback before on this one man. i played it again ofc but none extra i can really say man. not my vibe personal but i can see you trying to build something man i fucc with the confidence but yeah man idk what else to say.
Thanks for listening to my latest man appreciate you taking the time fr trying to grow with everything i do. lets keep cooking primo.
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Love this. The style feels very exotic. Takes me back to College summer days, and feels like when I would go for long walks on Saturday mornings to clear my head. I love the little sounds that are playing that give the track personality, especially the vox that feel really unique. The whole thing is just good energy music
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Hey everyone, I'm really excited to finally be uploading my THIRD song from my Waves EP, Waves, the EP's namesake. Hope you guys like it!
**Returning All Feedback!**
[https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/waves](https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/waves)
You got a really great flow and voice my man, maybe just work on your vocabulary. You used stallion twice right off the rip, it’s just good to have a lot of variations imo. Great track tho, here’s mine! https://on.soundcloud.com/FKZUp1yeDby3AFJNA
hey thanks for checking it out my man! I actually do not use stallion twice I only use it once lol. My first word is "Rapscallion".
Hey my man this track is mixed really well. I think you've got a nice sound and decent flow as well. There are a few areas where the flow seems a little corny but overall this is a really great track my man, great work!
Thanks man, I felt bad for not hearing it right so I just went and relistened. You obviously have a great grasp on rapping for sure!! Just maybe in your mix, isolate some of the harsher tones and bring them down, I usually use multiple eqs and it can work wonders!!! Btw which flows did you find corny? Just so I can avoid them lol
hey thanks my man!
This is a chill ass track. Nice lo-fi feel. Dark, low-key grimey aesthetic. This is a chill track my man. Can totally see someone spitting over this.
yoooooo how you doing man? This could be your best work yet, your voice works so well with the beat and the delivery is fueeeeggooo. Good work my G.
Would appreciate any feedback on my new one:
https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
hey what up Elliott! Thanks so much for the kind words!
Just checked out your demo, I think you have some pretty well executed ideas here. Love the energy, I feel like the delivery could use a bit more though. I dig the hook, and the mixing on the hook is really well done too especially at the end. Really well structured as well my man. I think the vocals could use some more mixing but its a demo so that makes sense. I think the lyrics and flow could be revisited a bit too during the verses, maybe switch up some of the rhymes and the way you land for something more unconventional. Also I'd love it if you finished the demo for that song I fucked with a while back just saying lol you are hella good in that style. See you around boiii
aayy thanks man, appreciate u. Yeah not my best work lyrically on this one, and I kinda knew it. I'mma go back and change some stuff so I appreciate the honesty. haha yesssiir i'm working on getting my EP stuff professionally mixed and mastered so IT'S FINE will be getting released soon i hope. stay fresh my bruthhaaaaa
Great delivery on this one! Definitely seen you on here before and I feel like this is higher quality than what I’ve heard previously. You sound confident and that goes a long way imo. Decent flows too, and I dig the beat. Nice work!
Here’s my latest: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ
Thank you so much man!!! I really like the vibe and your voice in your track, and I get you’re tryna do the laid back vibe but you can do laid back with a little edge to it, you know? Put a little passion behind what you’re saying, REALLY mean it and even if you do it in a chill style I feel like it’ll hit just a little harder
Nice work my man, great clarity and really good delivery. If you're looking for some critical feedback - be careful when using half rhymes. I myself have been really guilty of this, but when you're in the flow of writing, you get caught up in thinking that some things are rhyming better than they sound to other people. So for example, joke/of course/take notes is nearly there and would be with an accentuation of the accent but it sticks out a little at the moment. As I say I've been super guilty of this recently and am trying to go back through and listen through someone else's ears. but otherwise love the confidence and energy you bring to the mic man, sounds like you're smiling when you're doing it which is great to hear.
Grateful for any feedback on this, I did everything you can hear.
[https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Yo thank you so much for that feedback! I know I can definitely bend the words, but you’re right ima put a little more focus on it. You got a solid track there man!! The mix definitely needs a lot of work but I’m sure you know, the one criticism i have is your hooks. Hooks are easy and hard at the same time, sometimes just because a hook comes out easy doesn’t mean it’s good you know? This one sounds a bit predictable and nothing that really grabs you. LOVE your verses tho you killed it for sure
i like what you saying and the confidence and flows are cool. beat choice is tough and i like the diff cadence but idk you saying tough ish but you sound more goofy an chill then. overall cool track but yeah could just be me.
hows this sound to you?
https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan
I never rap about shit I wouldn’t do my man but I feel you I do have a corny white boy voice lmao. Bro you got such a nice voice, and a great flow! Your voice is way too loud tho, turn the gain down when you’re recording and use a limiter effect afterwards to keep the vocals from peaking past a certain point. You can also put a limiter on the beat, most have a preset to duck the music behind the vocals so you don’t feel like you have to max out your vocal volume. Regardless good shit!!
lol nahh just messed with my perception of your bars. It takes a while to find your voice an how you want to be heard. just have fun and it is good to be goofy dont take it as disrespect. Thank you for vibing with me appreciate your time and will keep what you said in mind going forward. Gracias an holla if you ever want a feature man
Oh man thatd be dope!! I’m working on a project rn, ima lay some shit down this week and see if I come across something you’d sound good on, do you have any style of beat you prefer?
Sound cool man im down. Uhm i started on boom baps love that old kanye sound but lately guitar has been cool to try n spit to but im down for whatever i want to grow as an artist primo.
dope track... really feeling the beat, great boom bap feel to it, your flow and ;lyrics are on point, fits the beat well. great job.
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
This is really good my guy! Great flows, good beat, you got bars and deliver them with confidence. The mix is also really good. Nothing feels out of place and sounds great as a whole! Good job man keep it up!
Here's mine, lemme know watchu think: https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/123c1b4/official_daily_feedback_thread/jdu4fzq?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3
Good some, short, but good. You flow really well on the beat. You have something special here, keep working.
https://on.soundcloud.com/LYa74WX7efgKh4yM8
Yo thank you so much that means so much!!! I really like the direction of that beat, I suggest adding a synth or something during the verse tho, just to add a little variation. By the time the chorus hits it gets a little stale, and maybe try moving the drums a bit in the intro? They sounded a bit stiff. Great work regardless man!
Hard work pays off! You've got a real fun voice with a nice cadence and comedic timing. I like the bars where you slyly diss someone with a bar but in a way that it halfway just feels like you're speaking your mind. The inflections that you add in your voice really make the style feel authentic and enjoyable to listen to
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Thank you so much man, it really means a lot! Holy fuckk that’s Fun track! That hook goes hard af and you have crazy nice energy on this track, I feel like maybe if you had a couple more punchlines that would’ve really taken it to the next level but it’s still a great track! I’d love to work with you sometime if you’re down
This is the next song that's up for release after I drop the one that's already queued. Produced by Beast Inside Beat, written, recorded, mixed and mastered by me so any feedback and critiques in these areas are greatly appreciated, specifically the bars as I tried to emphasize that the most.
Love!
Z
[Watchu Mean?](https://drive.google.com/file/d/13yx-x8AJPq8QAjurwmDXk2JUGFUDJdvi/view?usp=drivesdk)
This is sick bro! Love the flow on the beat and some good bars as well. Beat is very catchy and bouncy. I like the mix, maybe the vocals were a bit loud but it sounded good still and if that was what you was going for I see no problem with that. Keep it up!
Appreciate your thoughts bro! I'll revisit the vocals, made this song aaaaages ago and kinda heard it so much in the process of making it, I had to take a long ass break from it lmao. It's a different vibe from my usual shit but that was the point, to show my technicality. Thanks again for the feedback!
hey man, nicely made beat! chill but with some energy - like the use of the live drums breakdown before the beat changes slightly too. Only small thing I picked up on was that the kick at about 38s sound like it's got a bit too much high end in it? might just be a preference thing but it just stuck out to me so thought I'd mention it. Such a small thing, but overall beat is great my man.
Would appreciate some feedback on this please - I am the producer, writer, rapper, singer.
https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
I actually like this one, cool samples and prity chill, I like the guitar throughout
I tried to make a somewhat chill one myself, see what you think :)
https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/keep-it-fresh
Nice beat! I really like how wide the 808 is, it glues the song together and adds to the atmosphere. I also really like your addition of the breakbeat to switch it up, nice work!
dope beat... very serene and chill but still slaps. great sound selection and arrangement, I like how the mood switches about a minute in
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Damn I wish my mixes sounded as good as this, was bopping my head throughout, loved that "stop-start" technique at 0:34
I tried making something hard but a bit different to my other tunes, check it out if you have a minute :)
https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/mirror-mirror
Thanks for the feedback! Really liked your track I thought that beat was really unique. Only potential criticism would be sometimes your flow gets a bit choppy, but overall I really liked it
can deffo hear A$AP on this beat. Really nice vibe man, i like the high pitch snare cutting through it all. Really well made.
Grateful for feedback on this please:
[https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Hi, I like the beat, the bounce, and the background ambient/vocal fx.
I'm not that experienced with mixing but everything seems to sit down right in the mix, except for the snare drum, which needs to hit a little bit harder. I'd also consider playing with the groove a little bit more, to add more development to it.
Yooooo can you please check out my new song MOVE and tell me if you vibe wid it? Another one with a bit of a hype/club vibe - I wanna know if it gets the head bopping, if it's catchy, if you'd add it to a playlist.
[https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Will return all feedback later on. PEAACEEE
feel like you were too chill on this beat. like was expecting you to snap bars wise or cadence but you stay consistent through. can see what you were going for an impressive you id it all yourself but not feeling it how i think you want people to bop to it. Keep cooking CUZ!
Rip mine, Trash or nahh?
[https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan](https://soundcloud.com/mc_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan)
dope track... really like the opening, "ya I wrote the beat..." really catchy, cool way of bringing it back late as well. the entire thing is well produced, from your flows to how the beat evolves. great job
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
That beat switch at 1:21 feels so alien! I really like the instrumental of this track, it gets progressively better the more that you listen to it. The quality on everything is great, and I like how inventive the style is
them drums Ski mask would tenderize fr lol you could label it a ski mask type beat. i dont agree with all the sounds in there but it hits hard is different and stays bouncy. would like it more if you had a switch up where the tempo speed up for a section or some to keep it live but good effort man.
Rocc with this?
https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan
Absolutely. This has a very calm feel to it and i love it. I am so used to amped up fast paced heavy tracks that this was a refreshing change. I like every part of this, though I do feel like you could benefit from making your voice a tad louder, some lyrics are hard to understand.
Thank you for listening. Im glad i could provide a bop an we could share a vibe man. I hear you on the volume but it can be confusing with some people telling me its too loud over the beat lol as not an engineer i dont have enough experience to say or know other wise but foreally i appreciate you tuning in to my channel and finding a mood. I hope to improve in the future an make a bop you want to replay.
Not bad at all for third beat!! Agree thats some ski mask type, i would maybe add some little melody maybe lead or sum to add some variation and catchyness idk if thats a word lol. But great start bro for sure, just focus now making much as u can!
the overall vibe is cool but it gets too repetitive, try playing around with different drum patterns... some a bit more busy than others, then dip the drums out completely for a bar or two... just add a bit of variety but a solid start
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
I like this a lot. I like the way that you speed up the vocals with the beat to match it. Obviously that is what you’re supposed to do, but you do it a little more than usual if that makes sense, and it gives a very unique feel. It has me head bopping for sure with the flow.
the beat is fire... love the energy and dimensions to it, the acoustic drums with he drill bass sounds awesome... I don't understand the lyrics but the flow is undeniable, completes the song well, brings the right energy for the soundscape. dope!
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Holy shit man you really nailed the beat! Loved the sample in reverse it gave me the chills, drums are nice and punchy too, that bit crash kinda fx is what sold it for me. Very nice and good sounding bass/low frecuency in headphones and speakers. Nice one! It really honors the villain.
The 808s on this track are really dope!! Your style of vocal delivery reminds a lot of Young Thug, the way that your vocal inflections are kinda wild and you bring high energy to the delivery. Beat feels like R&B trap, I like the way the pianos add a heavy emotional vibe to it
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Holy shit man you are in a higher ground! Really liked the mix, your vocals and drums blend together more than nicely, those distorted 808s are sounding tight and clean caught me off guard for sure, ad libs got me floating in the atmosphere they sure help to create. Your flow is dope af man. Would and will listen again man for sure! Congrats!
[https://soundcloud.com/g0st-818963654/seen-the\_dr3am](https://soundcloud.com/g0st-818963654/seen-the_dr3am) Opinions? from europe so my english is not the best, first songs in english. lyrics in desc.
I'm really liking this style a lot. Chorus feels really dynamic, I'm liking how you take relatively simple lyrics and add your unique touch to it and drag out the lyrics. I think having a more traditional rapper as a feature on this track would help accentuate your style a bit more and allow it to stand out even more than it does already. Excited to hear more
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
This is a track of mine called "woken" by me and my close friend nenjavo. It is one of the tracks off of our collaborative project called, "Fiiit8pe". Any and all feedback is welcome!
[https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY](https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY)
https://soundcloud.com/kane_beats/soul
Want a soulful sound, no bass in this track, just drums and a sample chop. Any feedback would be great.
Will return feedback.
cool track, sounds very clean/minimalistic.... taking the drums out and bringing them back in brings a nice variety. without the bass the low-end does feel pretty empty. arrangement is great, love the sample playing in the middle with no drums. cool vibe.
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thanks man!
I'll see if I can get a bass in without it sounding cluttered.
I like it, the melody is kinda doom-esque so I think you've definitely got the right sort of sound. I'd like to hear Doom a bit easier over this with a slight sidechain on his vocals to the beat, or at least to the melody.
Nice work man, keep it up!
LMK what you think about my latest beat that I just dropped. It's a dark trap beat, would love some feedback about mixing and anything else that could be improved. Would love to hear someone rap on this!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WIBCyW3s-To
A little late to the thread today but I have something I think y'all will enjoy!
I produced and rapped on this track with my homies, it's got an experimental vibe with a complex electronic instrumental and cloud-inspired interludes. It'll be dropping on all platforms next month on April 21st.
Lmk what y'all think!!! As always, returning all feedback ❤️🔥
[https://soundcloud.com/redxcted27/elvaliente](https://soundcloud.com/redxcted27/elvaliente)
cool beat... love the experimental nature of it cause you never know what's coming next, shit just hits so hard once the beat drops... great energy, great arrangement, a bit distorted but that's intended I'm sure... mix is solid, full and loud. sound selection is great, epic and glitchy. overall a great job, I appreciate all the detail.
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thank you for the feedback; I'm glad you enjoyed the track!!
I checked out your remix - absolute fire. Your use of the sample as well as your designing of the drums make the track hit hard and feel like I'm listening to an old-school bootleg tape in the best of ways. My one note is the mixing of the acapella, but I'm sure that it's a matter of the quality of the acapella itself. Apart from that, it sounds like you have your sound pretty fleshed out, nice work!
thanks so much for the feedback. ya the acapellas weren't all the same quality, a few studio ones and then some DYI ones off the web so I did the best I could with those
The first rapper really attacked this beat hard. Second one really had a ton of personality in his voice, and I'm impressed with how well he followed up the first artist by adding in unique cadences and lyrics. All the artists do a great job of matching the aggressive energy present on the track! Not to mention how well it's mixed both in beat and vocal quality. You all really showed out here! Sounds great
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
nice! real epic sounding off the top... then when the beat/sample drops it gets even more dope... shit slaps man. love the spaced out feel of it but it still has a lot of energy. great mix, feels big, like an anthem. would be great to hear an artist on this.
let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
I really like it! I’m only listening through my phone speaker but sounds really good! Melody is my favorite part. Maybe the kick could have a bit more bass to it. It might just sound that way since I’m listening through my phone. But it’s a really nice track
Hi, not sure about the track type.
It's got influenced by pop and rap.
Please let me know what you think about it overall, and tips for bettering my mix while gaining more headroom are welcome🏅🔥
https://youtu.be/rmjprubjXWw
I like how thematically dedicated this track is. Fitting references to Nevermore is really dope and shows some dedication to the craft. I think that highly-customizable tracks like this are really going to find more of an audience as art gets more personalized for the masses. My main critique is that the audio quality could be a bit better. I think the switch-up at 1:45 was really cool and I like that you switched up your flow too, showing your versatility as an emcee
Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
First of all, thank you so much for the words, it means a lot, I appreciate it.
As so for the track on SoundCloud, I liked the elements on the beat, the ad-libs, the bounce, and the rhythm+ development of it throughout the song.
The rap and delivery are great, I like the switch-up in your flow: 1:20 second.
I'd highly recommend you do the same, in minute 1:50
I think it will boost your song dramatically.
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(FREE) ASAP ROCKY x CLAMS CASINO x LIL B CLOUD RAP TYPE BEAT - DROWNING, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/-ABxgCRqJKY
Yeah I like this, got a chill vibe to it, really like the sleigh bell type sound throughout :), mix is good to. I tired making a prity hard tune, mix isnt perfect but for my first go im happy :) https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/smiley
ambient iayze type beat https://youtu.be/l8eh9zflcdE drop a like & comment i\`ll return fs
Melodies on this are really impressive. Track definitely has that "youthful energy" on it. I think that the bass used is nice, and sounds professional, but I would've went with something with more of a sub-bass quality so that it can just bring out the best of the synths. Drums are nice too, I personally would turn them up just a little bit. Your beats are always on some futuristic dope stuff!! Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
https://soundcloud.com/dctothaa/crystal_plumage New track. Looking for suggestions, kinda new to making beats without heavy sampling. Will return feedback
Hey man, love the vibe. Bassline is sick, had me bobbing my head for sure. Left a comment on your SC, see if i can get some others to write some shiiii. Keep at it man, might have to rap over one of these type beats soon i been doing a lot of club shit and need a change up. Speaking of, grateful for any feedback on this please? I am the prod,writer,rapper,singer. https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
Just shot you a follow man, thanks for the feedback. Checked out that one you linked and a few other songs. I really like your flows and the beats, it’s all pretty creative. Hit me up on there, I’m working on some new stuff
this has no samples??? thats clean it sound ripped from a vinyl. Beat so smooth you could glide on it. intro was tad long but worth the wait you provided a vibe man. Keep cooking cuz this was toasty. Trying to find a new wave. [https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan](https://soundcloud.com/mc_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan) how does this vibe with you?
Only the drums were sampled off vinyl, rest was played with plugins. I like this bro, definitely got a unique sound to it. Maybe add a slight amount of compression to the vocal to make the volume sit together a little more at some points but other than that I think it’s great.
Ayye Gracias for your tiempo appreciate your time and yeet me some beats if you ever feel inclinded to work with a bummy atlanta rapper lol thank you for listening im not an engineer at all but will try to do better with the mix in the future
Dale bro, avisame si escuchas algo en mi pagina que te guste y podemos hacer algo tambien. Te mandaria mas pero a veces trabajo muy lento.
couldnt DM but there a few i bop to but the one that fit better with a song i have was crystal plummage. lemme know what you think but you have some nice sounds up there man i like what you were doing with falling in love. an no worry i feel you on the slow process lol im trying to get better at it
I could probably gather up some track outs from my MPC too, just not gonna be mixed down or anything. You tried to DM me on here?
yeah im cool with that. i tried but it says your unable to receive mssg or something
Aight, yeah idk how to fix that. I’ll hit you up on SoundCloud. Give e a few days to get some stuff together. I work during the day, so only free at night. And if you wanna use the one I posted, you got my permission. I can get you an unmastered version
Its cool man email me. [email protected] Could you extend the beat of crystal plummage?
sounds dope, you capture that sampled feel without sampling I guess... great lofi vibe, sounds warm and soulful, love the contrast in the bodies and how those drums hit. let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thanks bro! This definitely sounds like something DOOM would've hopped on, so mission accomplished. Really like the way you got the drums swinging on this one.
really appreciate the kind words my dude
This is real funky music. I'm extremely impressed with how captivating the bass melody is and how much punch the drums pack. I like how gritty the style feels. Like I'm listening to NY State of Mind for the first time again. Great beat! Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Thanks bro! Really feeling the beat and the flow and delivery on this. It’s all dope. I don’t even usually listen to stuff like this, but I’d add it to my playlist. Killed it on the chorus too.
Thank you for listening! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Been pretty excited to drop this one. Collabo with Passive the Rapper. I did the production and trippy vocals in the middle. Passive did all the other vocals. https://youtu.be/QlKabiptgLg
This fire my dude! Man I love the vocals in the middle and the chops, really nice tone to them. Passive brought it too. Keep at it my guy! Would love some feedback on this please if you got time: https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
Thank you thank you. I appreciate it. Great job on the beat. That really grimy synth hits really hard. Flow is nice. Hook is nice. My only gripe is the vocals sound a little quiet. Obviously, they're easier to hear/make out on the hook since you strip some of the instruments away. In the verses, on the other hand... I don't know if that was intentional. If it wasn't intentional, adding some compression, shaping the EQ a little bit, and/or stripping back some of the reverb might help the vocals pop a little more.
I feel like the mixing could be better and the adlibs volume could be lower
Thank you. That's fair. Anything in particular about the mixing other than the volume of the adlibs?
I feel the over dubbed vocals could be tucked in better to your main vocals, and toward the end maybe a little less reverb or echo.
Also if you can take a look at mine https://open.spotify.com/track/7ewbIHhcALIvb15Bi3rHJ0?si=z_hPkEU7R5CX-ienxzJpUA
Oooh, that beat is really nice. Wasn't expecting phonk. I really like the delivery and flow, too. The lyrics don't really do much for me, but the whole song sounds really professional. So, and I can see why you get thousands of listens a piece for most of your songs.
I could see that. Thank you.
I made a new song, I’ve been getting some views, but the save rate hasn’t been to high, so I was wondering what everyone thinks? https://open.spotify.com/track/7ewbIHhcALIvb15Bi3rHJ0?si=z_hPkEU7R5CX-ienxzJpUA
I like the rhythm of it, the interesting development, and the melody. The chorus seems to work, but think that on this particular track, you need to change its pattern more along the track (from minute 1 and on) Consider adding lyrics to Spotify. Please let me know what you think about my track, the vocal delivery, and how to make my mix better 🙂 Peace.👌🏽 https://youtu.be/rmjprubjXWw
WESTSIDE GUNN TYPE BEAT ~ MOB, any kind of support is welcome ❤️ https://youtu.be/McKFozTUC_I
i really like what you did with that one segment, would be interesting to hear additional drums just for the hell of it.
Yooo that’s really really good, not really sure what else to say
Nice, airy, open and slow like a good Gunn beat should be. Dig the sounds you used here, it’s got that eerie feel a lot of his tracks do but with an original flavor to it. Great job. Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ
Wow, this is so dope!!! Really, really smooth pocket that you carved out in the percussion that slides so well with what I'm assuming is the sample. Would love to hear someone rap over this, but it works well as a standalone track without vocals on it too. I would appreciate your thoughts on my track as well! [https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY](https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY)
https://youtu.be/1kA8oL4BrZQ lmk what you think
I dig this a lot actually. Really like the ambient, airy, futuristic feel of the beat. Gives me extra terrestrial vibes haha. I think it could use maybe a bit heavier bass? Though it sounds fine as it is now. Nice work! Here’s mine: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ
This is super dope. Really like all the space and depth you got going on in the beat. Definitely nailed that outerspace vibe. Here's mine: https://soundcloud.com/dctothaa/crystal\_plumage
feedback appreciated! https://youtu.be/00hRKPcvZ-c
Great beat overall, I like the melody, the samples, the dynamics, and the development of it. My only suggestion for you is to add parts with more percussion or high hats on the sides to boost that experimental vibe.
Glad to see you back!! Really diggin that sampled voice, feels like some Otis Redding style music flipped to be something more industrial and modern sounding. The sampled saxophone is hard too and gives it that old-school vintage feeling. Definitely has a tribal feel to it, and like always, I like how it blends vintage styles with futuristic ones Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
appreciate the feedback! ur track sounds dope, the flow is reminding me of jpegmafia
Dope!! I get that comparison a whole lot
my latest: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK
reviewed already but great vibes
First song on my first EP, thought it was fitting to share it. If you like it then check out the rest of the EP, lots of variety in it :) https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/welcome-to-the-madhouse
Only_Wallace - Slipping Into Darkness https://youtu.be/JGWIc2q5ljE
Finding a Vibe. [https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan](https://soundcloud.com/mc_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan) Hows it coming along? Just an MC shout out justdan RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK
dope track... the beat is nice and laid back... really like your vocal delivery, but they get a bit distorted at times, and feel a bit low... just need them to sit better in the mix cause they complement the beat really well otherwise. let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
MF DOOM GOATED so off rip points for the mad villainous. i like how fucking trippy yo beat is fading in an out with the sounds i feel like you matched the vibe well on this one. Vibez man holla if you ever want an MC for something you got chilly sounds. Thank you for taking the time to listen to mine. Im in no way an engineer or producer but im happy i could provide a vibe we could share for a momento. keep it cooking primo.
thanks really appreciate that. would love to have you on one of my beats, I'll send you a dm
I really dig this beat. The way it starts off feels like a classic Charlie Brown Christmas song. I like the direction you went in with your lyrics, and the way that you would sneak in these really dope, heartfelt vocal melodies. Track definitely showcases your talent, I'd say you're on the right path Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
lol i already left feedback before on this one man. i played it again ofc but none extra i can really say man. not my vibe personal but i can see you trying to build something man i fucc with the confidence but yeah man idk what else to say. Thanks for listening to my latest man appreciate you taking the time fr trying to grow with everything i do. lets keep cooking primo.
My bad family!! Thank you for listening to it again
no worries man gotta keep working an growing.
no doubt
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Feedback appreciated! https://youtu.be/Jtp62Y12ZDg
Love this. The style feels very exotic. Takes me back to College summer days, and feels like when I would go for long walks on Saturday mornings to clear my head. I love the little sounds that are playing that give the track personality, especially the vox that feel really unique. The whole thing is just good energy music Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Thanks for the feedback! Listened to yours and a couple others and your flow is nice!
Much love!! Glad you liked what you heard
Hey everyone, I'm really excited to finally be uploading my THIRD song from my Waves EP, Waves, the EP's namesake. Hope you guys like it! **Returning All Feedback!** [https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/waves](https://soundcloud.com/onitaro/waves)
You got a really great flow and voice my man, maybe just work on your vocabulary. You used stallion twice right off the rip, it’s just good to have a lot of variations imo. Great track tho, here’s mine! https://on.soundcloud.com/FKZUp1yeDby3AFJNA
hey thanks for checking it out my man! I actually do not use stallion twice I only use it once lol. My first word is "Rapscallion". Hey my man this track is mixed really well. I think you've got a nice sound and decent flow as well. There are a few areas where the flow seems a little corny but overall this is a really great track my man, great work!
Thanks man, I felt bad for not hearing it right so I just went and relistened. You obviously have a great grasp on rapping for sure!! Just maybe in your mix, isolate some of the harsher tones and bring them down, I usually use multiple eqs and it can work wonders!!! Btw which flows did you find corny? Just so I can avoid them lol
I like this, especially the flow and beat selection. I think you’re onto something. Here’s mine: https://soundcloud.com/dctothaa/crystal_plumage
hey thanks my man! This is a chill ass track. Nice lo-fi feel. Dark, low-key grimey aesthetic. This is a chill track my man. Can totally see someone spitting over this.
yoooooo how you doing man? This could be your best work yet, your voice works so well with the beat and the delivery is fueeeeggooo. Good work my G. Would appreciate any feedback on my new one: https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
hey what up Elliott! Thanks so much for the kind words! Just checked out your demo, I think you have some pretty well executed ideas here. Love the energy, I feel like the delivery could use a bit more though. I dig the hook, and the mixing on the hook is really well done too especially at the end. Really well structured as well my man. I think the vocals could use some more mixing but its a demo so that makes sense. I think the lyrics and flow could be revisited a bit too during the verses, maybe switch up some of the rhymes and the way you land for something more unconventional. Also I'd love it if you finished the demo for that song I fucked with a while back just saying lol you are hella good in that style. See you around boiii
aayy thanks man, appreciate u. Yeah not my best work lyrically on this one, and I kinda knew it. I'mma go back and change some stuff so I appreciate the honesty. haha yesssiir i'm working on getting my EP stuff professionally mixed and mastered so IT'S FINE will be getting released soon i hope. stay fresh my bruthhaaaaa
No notes, I was waiting on this one!! 🔥🔥🔥
I’ve been working hard af on my craft, would love some feedback! All will be returned https://on.soundcloud.com/FKZUp1yeDby3AFJNA
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Aw man thanks! Any work of yours I can check?
Great delivery on this one! Definitely seen you on here before and I feel like this is higher quality than what I’ve heard previously. You sound confident and that goes a long way imo. Decent flows too, and I dig the beat. Nice work! Here’s my latest: https://open.spotify.com/track/0KFybmJkVxe7YzTmwL1VYr?si=MV0HRm_uSa6ZSWI-E-M1FQ
Thank you so much man!!! I really like the vibe and your voice in your track, and I get you’re tryna do the laid back vibe but you can do laid back with a little edge to it, you know? Put a little passion behind what you’re saying, REALLY mean it and even if you do it in a chill style I feel like it’ll hit just a little harder
Nice work my man, great clarity and really good delivery. If you're looking for some critical feedback - be careful when using half rhymes. I myself have been really guilty of this, but when you're in the flow of writing, you get caught up in thinking that some things are rhyming better than they sound to other people. So for example, joke/of course/take notes is nearly there and would be with an accentuation of the accent but it sticks out a little at the moment. As I say I've been super guilty of this recently and am trying to go back through and listen through someone else's ears. but otherwise love the confidence and energy you bring to the mic man, sounds like you're smiling when you're doing it which is great to hear. Grateful for any feedback on this, I did everything you can hear. [https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
Yo thank you so much for that feedback! I know I can definitely bend the words, but you’re right ima put a little more focus on it. You got a solid track there man!! The mix definitely needs a lot of work but I’m sure you know, the one criticism i have is your hooks. Hooks are easy and hard at the same time, sometimes just because a hook comes out easy doesn’t mean it’s good you know? This one sounds a bit predictable and nothing that really grabs you. LOVE your verses tho you killed it for sure
i like what you saying and the confidence and flows are cool. beat choice is tough and i like the diff cadence but idk you saying tough ish but you sound more goofy an chill then. overall cool track but yeah could just be me. hows this sound to you? https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan
I never rap about shit I wouldn’t do my man but I feel you I do have a corny white boy voice lmao. Bro you got such a nice voice, and a great flow! Your voice is way too loud tho, turn the gain down when you’re recording and use a limiter effect afterwards to keep the vocals from peaking past a certain point. You can also put a limiter on the beat, most have a preset to duck the music behind the vocals so you don’t feel like you have to max out your vocal volume. Regardless good shit!!
lol nahh just messed with my perception of your bars. It takes a while to find your voice an how you want to be heard. just have fun and it is good to be goofy dont take it as disrespect. Thank you for vibing with me appreciate your time and will keep what you said in mind going forward. Gracias an holla if you ever want a feature man
Oh man thatd be dope!! I’m working on a project rn, ima lay some shit down this week and see if I come across something you’d sound good on, do you have any style of beat you prefer?
Sound cool man im down. Uhm i started on boom baps love that old kanye sound but lately guitar has been cool to try n spit to but im down for whatever i want to grow as an artist primo.
dope track... really feeling the beat, great boom bap feel to it, your flow and ;lyrics are on point, fits the beat well. great job. let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thanks so much! Yoo that beat is nasty and it fits perfect, do you make a lot of beats in that style?
thanks! ya I like to get outside the box with the beats to keep it fun
This is really good my guy! Great flows, good beat, you got bars and deliver them with confidence. The mix is also really good. Nothing feels out of place and sounds great as a whole! Good job man keep it up! Here's mine, lemme know watchu think: https://www.reddit.com/r/makinghiphop/comments/123c1b4/official_daily_feedback_thread/jdu4fzq?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3
Thank you so much bro, that drive link is playing for me tho!!! Lmk if there’s another way I can check it
That drum pattern and sample are 🔥💪🏾 Tonally you remind me of Asher a lil bit Keep grinding
Good some, short, but good. You flow really well on the beat. You have something special here, keep working. https://on.soundcloud.com/LYa74WX7efgKh4yM8
Yo thank you so much that means so much!!! I really like the direction of that beat, I suggest adding a synth or something during the verse tho, just to add a little variation. By the time the chorus hits it gets a little stale, and maybe try moving the drums a bit in the intro? They sounded a bit stiff. Great work regardless man!
Hard work pays off! You've got a real fun voice with a nice cadence and comedic timing. I like the bars where you slyly diss someone with a bar but in a way that it halfway just feels like you're speaking your mind. The inflections that you add in your voice really make the style feel authentic and enjoyable to listen to Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Thank you so much man, it really means a lot! Holy fuckk that’s Fun track! That hook goes hard af and you have crazy nice energy on this track, I feel like maybe if you had a couple more punchlines that would’ve really taken it to the next level but it’s still a great track! I’d love to work with you sometime if you’re down
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it! I would love to work on something
This is the next song that's up for release after I drop the one that's already queued. Produced by Beast Inside Beat, written, recorded, mixed and mastered by me so any feedback and critiques in these areas are greatly appreciated, specifically the bars as I tried to emphasize that the most. Love! Z [Watchu Mean?](https://drive.google.com/file/d/13yx-x8AJPq8QAjurwmDXk2JUGFUDJdvi/view?usp=drivesdk)
This is sick bro! Love the flow on the beat and some good bars as well. Beat is very catchy and bouncy. I like the mix, maybe the vocals were a bit loud but it sounded good still and if that was what you was going for I see no problem with that. Keep it up!
Appreciate your thoughts bro! I'll revisit the vocals, made this song aaaaages ago and kinda heard it so much in the process of making it, I had to take a long ass break from it lmao. It's a different vibe from my usual shit but that was the point, to show my technicality. Thanks again for the feedback!
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hey man, nicely made beat! chill but with some energy - like the use of the live drums breakdown before the beat changes slightly too. Only small thing I picked up on was that the kick at about 38s sound like it's got a bit too much high end in it? might just be a preference thing but it just stuck out to me so thought I'd mention it. Such a small thing, but overall beat is great my man. Would appreciate some feedback on this please - I am the producer, writer, rapper, singer. https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing
I actually like this one, cool samples and prity chill, I like the guitar throughout I tried to make a somewhat chill one myself, see what you think :) https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/keep-it-fresh
Nice beat! I really like how wide the 808 is, it glues the song together and adds to the atmosphere. I also really like your addition of the breakbeat to switch it up, nice work!
thanks a lot man
dope beat... very serene and chill but still slaps. great sound selection and arrangement, I like how the mood switches about a minute in let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UoUNMzCZ824 lmk what you think I’m a little self conscious of this one
Damn I wish my mixes sounded as good as this, was bopping my head throughout, loved that "stop-start" technique at 0:34 I tried making something hard but a bit different to my other tunes, check it out if you have a minute :) https://innocentfool.bandcamp.com/track/mirror-mirror
Thanks for the feedback! Really liked your track I thought that beat was really unique. Only potential criticism would be sometimes your flow gets a bit choppy, but overall I really liked it
Thanks very much, just starting out so its all a work in progress :)
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can deffo hear A$AP on this beat. Really nice vibe man, i like the high pitch snare cutting through it all. Really well made. Grateful for feedback on this please: [https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
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Hi, I like the beat, the bounce, and the background ambient/vocal fx. I'm not that experienced with mixing but everything seems to sit down right in the mix, except for the snare drum, which needs to hit a little bit harder. I'd also consider playing with the groove a little bit more, to add more development to it.
Yooooo can you please check out my new song MOVE and tell me if you vibe wid it? Another one with a bit of a hype/club vibe - I wanna know if it gets the head bopping, if it's catchy, if you'd add it to a playlist. [https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm\_source=clipboard&utm\_medium=text&utm\_campaign=social\_sharing](https://soundcloud.com/elliott-royston/move?si=a6fe2d9eec5542699b8ca3d280226e5f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing) Will return all feedback later on. PEAACEEE
feel like you were too chill on this beat. like was expecting you to snap bars wise or cadence but you stay consistent through. can see what you were going for an impressive you id it all yourself but not feeling it how i think you want people to bop to it. Keep cooking CUZ! Rip mine, Trash or nahh? [https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan](https://soundcloud.com/mc_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan)
dope track... really like the opening, "ya I wrote the beat..." really catchy, cool way of bringing it back late as well. the entire thing is well produced, from your flows to how the beat evolves. great job let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
That beat switch at 1:21 feels so alien! I really like the instrumental of this track, it gets progressively better the more that you listen to it. The quality on everything is great, and I like how inventive the style is
Let me know your thoughts and feedback on my latest drop: https://on.soundcloud.com/PFqxBsezrgSyrwEn8 Returning all!!!! Just drop a link
I made my third beat, and I’m looking for insight to improve it! Thank you and i am returning all feedback https://on.soundcloud.com/LYa74WX7efgKh4yM8
them drums Ski mask would tenderize fr lol you could label it a ski mask type beat. i dont agree with all the sounds in there but it hits hard is different and stays bouncy. would like it more if you had a switch up where the tempo speed up for a section or some to keep it live but good effort man. Rocc with this? https://soundcloud.com/mc\_r3b3l/vida-of-a-mexican-prod-justdan
Absolutely. This has a very calm feel to it and i love it. I am so used to amped up fast paced heavy tracks that this was a refreshing change. I like every part of this, though I do feel like you could benefit from making your voice a tad louder, some lyrics are hard to understand.
Thank you for listening. Im glad i could provide a bop an we could share a vibe man. I hear you on the volume but it can be confusing with some people telling me its too loud over the beat lol as not an engineer i dont have enough experience to say or know other wise but foreally i appreciate you tuning in to my channel and finding a mood. I hope to improve in the future an make a bop you want to replay.
Not bad at all for third beat!! Agree thats some ski mask type, i would maybe add some little melody maybe lead or sum to add some variation and catchyness idk if thats a word lol. But great start bro for sure, just focus now making much as u can!
the overall vibe is cool but it gets too repetitive, try playing around with different drum patterns... some a bit more busy than others, then dip the drums out completely for a bar or two... just add a bit of variety but a solid start let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
I like this a lot. I like the way that you speed up the vocals with the beat to match it. Obviously that is what you’re supposed to do, but you do it a little more than usual if that makes sense, and it gives a very unique feel. It has me head bopping for sure with the flow.
thanks!
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the beat is fire... love the energy and dimensions to it, the acoustic drums with he drill bass sounds awesome... I don't understand the lyrics but the flow is undeniable, completes the song well, brings the right energy for the soundscape. dope! let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Holy shit man you really nailed the beat! Loved the sample in reverse it gave me the chills, drums are nice and punchy too, that bit crash kinda fx is what sold it for me. Very nice and good sounding bass/low frecuency in headphones and speakers. Nice one! It really honors the villain.
thanks for the kind words, really appreciate it
The 808s on this track are really dope!! Your style of vocal delivery reminds a lot of Young Thug, the way that your vocal inflections are kinda wild and you bring high energy to the delivery. Beat feels like R&B trap, I like the way the pianos add a heavy emotional vibe to it Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Holy shit man you are in a higher ground! Really liked the mix, your vocals and drums blend together more than nicely, those distorted 808s are sounding tight and clean caught me off guard for sure, ad libs got me floating in the atmosphere they sure help to create. Your flow is dope af man. Would and will listen again man for sure! Congrats!
Damn thank you so much :) comments like this brighten my day
[https://soundcloud.com/g0st-818963654/seen-the\_dr3am](https://soundcloud.com/g0st-818963654/seen-the_dr3am) Opinions? from europe so my english is not the best, first songs in english. lyrics in desc.
I'm really liking this style a lot. Chorus feels really dynamic, I'm liking how you take relatively simple lyrics and add your unique touch to it and drag out the lyrics. I think having a more traditional rapper as a feature on this track would help accentuate your style a bit more and allow it to stand out even more than it does already. Excited to hear more Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
Thanks really preciate that !! I dig hard your flow and the whole song is fuck everybody vibe! And that hook is hella catchy bro
Much love to you! Thank you, means a lot that you checked my track out
This is a track of mine called "woken" by me and my close friend nenjavo. It is one of the tracks off of our collaborative project called, "Fiiit8pe". Any and all feedback is welcome! [https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY](https://on.soundcloud.com/8eGCY)
I like it and the vibe in general is good some vocal processing could help though imo
Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/kane_beats/soul Want a soulful sound, no bass in this track, just drums and a sample chop. Any feedback would be great. Will return feedback.
cool track, sounds very clean/minimalistic.... taking the drums out and bringing them back in brings a nice variety. without the bass the low-end does feel pretty empty. arrangement is great, love the sample playing in the middle with no drums. cool vibe. let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thanks man! I'll see if I can get a bass in without it sounding cluttered. I like it, the melody is kinda doom-esque so I think you've definitely got the right sort of sound. I'd like to hear Doom a bit easier over this with a slight sidechain on his vocals to the beat, or at least to the melody. Nice work man, keep it up!
thanks, appreciate the feedback! I did actually use the side chain against the sample on a couple beats, but a good point going forward to do it more
LMK what you think about my latest beat that I just dropped. It's a dark trap beat, would love some feedback about mixing and anything else that could be improved. Would love to hear someone rap on this! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WIBCyW3s-To
A little late to the thread today but I have something I think y'all will enjoy! I produced and rapped on this track with my homies, it's got an experimental vibe with a complex electronic instrumental and cloud-inspired interludes. It'll be dropping on all platforms next month on April 21st. Lmk what y'all think!!! As always, returning all feedback ❤️🔥 [https://soundcloud.com/redxcted27/elvaliente](https://soundcloud.com/redxcted27/elvaliente)
cool beat... love the experimental nature of it cause you never know what's coming next, shit just hits so hard once the beat drops... great energy, great arrangement, a bit distorted but that's intended I'm sure... mix is solid, full and loud. sound selection is great, epic and glitchy. overall a great job, I appreciate all the detail. let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
Thank you for the feedback; I'm glad you enjoyed the track!! I checked out your remix - absolute fire. Your use of the sample as well as your designing of the drums make the track hit hard and feel like I'm listening to an old-school bootleg tape in the best of ways. My one note is the mixing of the acapella, but I'm sure that it's a matter of the quality of the acapella itself. Apart from that, it sounds like you have your sound pretty fleshed out, nice work!
thanks so much for the feedback. ya the acapellas weren't all the same quality, a few studio ones and then some DYI ones off the web so I did the best I could with those
The first rapper really attacked this beat hard. Second one really had a ton of personality in his voice, and I'm impressed with how well he followed up the first artist by adding in unique cadences and lyrics. All the artists do a great job of matching the aggressive energy present on the track! Not to mention how well it's mixed both in beat and vocal quality. You all really showed out here! Sounds great Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
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nice! real epic sounding off the top... then when the beat/sample drops it gets even more dope... shit slaps man. love the spaced out feel of it but it still has a lot of energy. great mix, feels big, like an anthem. would be great to hear an artist on this. let me know what you think of my "MF DOOM - Ballskin" remix: [https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294](https://youtu.be/lp8Tn0ZqY84?t=294) (starts at 4:55)
I really like it! I’m only listening through my phone speaker but sounds really good! Melody is my favorite part. Maybe the kick could have a bit more bass to it. It might just sound that way since I’m listening through my phone. But it’s a really nice track
thank you, really appreciate that
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Hi, not sure about the track type. It's got influenced by pop and rap. Please let me know what you think about it overall, and tips for bettering my mix while gaining more headroom are welcome🏅🔥 https://youtu.be/rmjprubjXWw
I like how thematically dedicated this track is. Fitting references to Nevermore is really dope and shows some dedication to the craft. I think that highly-customizable tracks like this are really going to find more of an audience as art gets more personalized for the masses. My main critique is that the audio quality could be a bit better. I think the switch-up at 1:45 was really cool and I like that you switched up your flow too, showing your versatility as an emcee Lmk what you think: https://soundcloud.com/astrorockit/blackjack-aces
First of all, thank you so much for the words, it means a lot, I appreciate it. As so for the track on SoundCloud, I liked the elements on the beat, the ad-libs, the bounce, and the rhythm+ development of it throughout the song. The rap and delivery are great, I like the switch-up in your flow: 1:20 second. I'd highly recommend you do the same, in minute 1:50 I think it will boost your song dramatically.
Dope!!! I'm happy to hear that
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c8LpVmetBJU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c8LpVmetBJU) made another song, wondering if it's worth promoting